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Sargon37
Sargon37Lv41yr
2023-11-20 11:02

This fix is mostly good. The writing quality is good with there being minimal errors along with well explained power ups and such. The only gripe I have is how quick he is to demonize the Gods. Before even meeting a God, he decides that ALL GODS are evil, deserving of hatred, and one of the main reasons for human suffering when the vast majority are A) Following the rules set by Ouranos and B) don’t know the story behind the dungeon.

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Artist_Arton
Artist_ArtonLv4

i agree with your opinion but i might add that then dangon Crete him because of its heated the gods so it's likely that dangon influenced him like that

Artist_Arton
Artist_ArtonLv4

you now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsense

Artist_Arton:i agree with your opinion but i might add that then dangon Crete him because of its heated the gods so it's likely that dangon influenced him like that
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jackslash_9
jackslash_9Lv4

.....What?

Artist_Arton:you now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsense
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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I understand you suffering my friend, believe me I do

jackslash_9:.....What?
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Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

Artist_Arton:you now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsense
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Brilliant_Dream
Brilliant_DreamLv1

Sect leader looks like your comprehension had stagnated if you are not able to read that.

Ototsu_Yume:
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Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4

Are we reading the same thing? The writing quality is God awful. The characters speak like chuuni's and the dialogue is stale asf. A lot of the English is just plan wrong and the grammar isn't great either.

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