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Demon_Of_Lust
Demon_Of_LustModerator1yr
2023-11-16 05:25

Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!

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Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

thanks for this good review!

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJModerator

What about his New family he will make in One Piece World.? Will he take them with him.?

Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

this is spoiler :⁠-⁠(

Dark_PersonJJ:What about his New family he will make in One Piece World.? Will he take them with him.?
Lee_kriston_sovtch
Lee_kriston_sovtchLv1

Harem??

Demon_Of_Lust
Demon_Of_LustModerator

Yes

Lee_kriston_sovtch:Harem??
Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

yes

Lee_kriston_sovtch:Harem??
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJModerator

You will update today

Yass_Odyssey:yes
DRShikimori
DRShikimoriLv3

I don't know what you're talking about, I've read so many fanfics about MC wanting to return home, it can be said that among all the motivations of MC reincarnators, this is the most cliché motivation

Finicar
FinicarLv3

you have the names of them??

DRShikimori:I don't know what you're talking about, I've read so many fanfics about MC wanting to return home, it can be said that among all the motivations of MC reincarnators, this is the most cliché motivation
Demon_Of_Lust
Demon_Of_LustModerator

Bro give me ther names cause I didn't read a FF like that

DRShikimori:I don't know what you're talking about, I've read so many fanfics about MC wanting to return home, it can be said that among all the motivations of MC reincarnators, this is the most cliché motivation
cereal_fisher_1194
cereal_fisher_1194Lv4

they were mainstream 2 years ago( don't remember the name)

Demon_Of_Lust:Bro give me ther names cause I didn't read a FF like that
Chris_Lake
Chris_LakeLv14

they are really old, too cheesy too

Demon_Of_Lust:Bro give me ther names cause I didn't read a FF like that
Mysteryon
MysteryonLv14

I always hated those type of fanfics

DRShikimori:I don't know what you're talking about, I've read so many fanfics about MC wanting to return home, it can be said that among all the motivations of MC reincarnators, this is the most cliché motivation
Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

I don't know why people don't love MCs who want to go back home , i mean there is nothing interesting in the One Piece world (except the power), on Earth we have a lot to do to enjoy it.

Mysteryon:I always hated those type of fanfics
Mysteryon
MysteryonLv14

It's just that those kind of mc's generally forget to enjoy their time in their new world, focusing too much on finding a way back, ignoring the fact they died in their original world and it's time to move on.

Yass_Odyssey:I don't know why people don't love MCs who want to go back home , i mean there is nothing interesting in the One Piece world (except the power), on Earth we have a lot to do to enjoy it.
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJModerator

I just hope he will take his New family he will have with the girls with him,

Yass_Odyssey:I don't know why people don't love MCs who want to go back home , i mean there is nothing interesting in the One Piece world (except the power), on Earth we have a lot to do to enjoy it.
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Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

of course he will do

Dark_PersonJJ:I just hope he will take his New family he will have with the girls with him,
Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

I understand your view point , but not all MCs like that

Mysteryon:It's just that those kind of mc's generally forget to enjoy their time in their new world, focusing too much on finding a way back, ignoring the fact they died in their original world and it's time to move on.
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Unreasonable? Who would want to be a normal human on earth when in One Piece you can have the strength to destroy mountains? It seems unreasonable to me to want to return, If you want a modern society, strive to transform One Piece on earth or at least into something similar.

Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

getting power and having the way to return to home anytime is better (my opinion

Gabichu_Yeah:Unreasonable? Who would want to be a normal human on earth when in One Piece you can have the strength to destroy mountains? It seems unreasonable to me to want to return, If you want a modern society, strive to transform One Piece on earth or at least into something similar.
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