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this guy...sigh..much more outrageous than the other book I'm reading that's just like this one but less Letrius MC
looks like Kakuzu is going to live in this fanfic
through his eyes I'm sure it looks like he walked in on a murder Sean lol!
he's got sugar mommy Frya to pay for him
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?? no one talked about that? this guy is getting delusional in his old age
please return to, to go further beyond soon as well
why does he do anything he does?
you mean black
it's definitely not Christmas anywhere in the world
and what happen to the battle at Navy HQ???
what's going on? they already know him they where there on the day he married Hancock and now he's just a friend?
lol I hope she has a face
this version of Asuma is just to pitiful..lol 🤣
is he thinking about..breeding the three snake princesses?..oh my!
lol Snitching on yourself it's crazy
this story has fallen off for me, you just keep repeating things from earlier chapters, not to mention the complete copy and Paste of paragraphs from earlier in the same chapter I feel like I have been hit with a Genjutsu just rereading trash on repeat. the story is not bad but there was no reason for the MC to be left out of the village's influence. you might as well just time-skip the moment he was put in the academy if you don't know what you want to write for this time frame because no one cares about a 14 -year-old girl who will have nothing to do with the MC having a crush on him. we only care about the Heroine. if you want to mention how the village changed without the MC influence or these no-name girls you can just mention it in one full chapter after the time-skip or give it a brief mention. no one cares either way because this isn't moving the story along