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2024-03-25 15:10

Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.

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stromerthaha
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Tell one thing bro is this a translation or a self made story

Yass_Odyssey
Yass_OdysseyAuthor

It's my story .

stromerthaha:Tell one thing bro is this a translation or a self made story
Dark_PersonJJ
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hello thare, Hope everything is fine

Yass_Odyssey:It's my story .
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currently ✨ just keep supporting us with comments & power stones

Dark_PersonJJ:hello thare, Hope everything is fine
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