Item: One Piece:The Lust System
Rating: 5
Author: Finicar

FinicarLv31yr

2023-11-16 07:30

good story,good plot,good grammar,cool MC ,everything is good yeaaaahhhh~

One Piece:The Lust System

Yass_Odyssey

4.8

159 Chs

Liked by 43 people

Replies7

tatsumi_oLv4

Hard cap on both the MC and Grammar 🧢🧢

4mth

Fang_ywanLv1

It's become pretty good in the advanced chapters

tatsumi_o:Hard cap on both the MC and Grammar 🧢🧢

25d

tatsumi_oLv4

the first impression is the key who cares if its get good on “chapter 100”

Fang_ywan:It's become pretty good in the advanced chapters

23d

ItaliangodnikomLv1

He Re-write the chapters so stop complaining

tatsumi_o:the first impression is the key who cares if its get good on “chapter 100”

22d

tatsumi_oLv4

I’m not complaining, all i am saying is the truth if you can read garbage just cuz it’s has harem it’s your problem

Italiangodnikom:He Re-write the chapters so stop complaining

21d

ItaliangodnikomLv1

TRASH is your m'om

tatsumi_o:I’m not complaining, all i am saying is the truth if you can read garbage just cuz it’s has harem it’s your problem
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21d

ItaliangodnikomLv1

tatsumi_o:I’m not complaining, all i am saying is the truth if you can read garbage just cuz it’s has harem it’s your problem
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21d

Other Reviews

Dark_PersonJJModerator

At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.

1yr

Demon_Of_LustModerator

Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!

1yr

chocolate_lover44Lv1

Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.

8mth

Decadent0Lv3

It's good now.....................................................................................................................................

1yr

Dark_PersonJJModerator

As my thanks for this story, Sexy Nami Pic.

1yr

rikdo_729Lv3

such a good story~i love it!.............

1yr

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