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DaoistscfBvoLv121yr
2023-10-29 05:54

It just doesn't make sense!. Many things are not explained and is the back story of the character and about how he got the ability. I kind of like the idea the author had but feels like the execution is bad. Hope it gets better and adds the missing details somehow.

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chaz_marsLv15

how he got the ability. what ability? the talent that everyone has one and his is item drops?

DaoistscfBvoLv12

i just meant that the talents or ability that he has or the fact whether everyone has some kind of talents was never really explained . I think that these things should have been a bit more explained as the story will be build on this and there are many scenarios that made me feel that the author is rushing things like his background etc . Should have given a bit more importance into it , well it's my perspective and like I said ,I actually like the idea that the author had but guess the execution wasn't of my taste!

chaz_mars:how he got the ability. what ability? the talent that everyone has one and his is item drops?
chaz_marsLv15

well similar concepts are rather abundant out there nowadays. so I suppose it's similar to cultivation novels not needing to explain what cultivation is. or video game bevels not needing to explain what a guild is. (on a side note I actually had someone ask me to explain what a guild is after I told them I was reading reincarnation of the strongest guild master.) these are general things most people who read the genre will already know as common knowledge. or unless they are completely new to the world of webnovels they will pick it up as they go. for instance it mentioned in this novel that he had the drop chance thing and labeled it on his status as a talent. or something similar. haven't read that in awhile. then it also mentioned other important characters also having talents. ximen qing had some dragon related talent and the angel girl had something too. so the talents aren't too rare at minimum. the system/talent are supposably his golden finger from transmigrating. but that seems to be just an excuse to put the tag on the novel right now. as his past life has no bearing atm. as for his current life it dies give out details as they come up. his parents signed a contract and have to work most if the time but they still care for him as best they can. he was a star student in school etc. the setting information is much easier to bring up when he is involved with it. otherwhise if we just had to figure it out from random exposition we wouldn't be able to get to much of a story before the pay wall.

DaoistscfBvo:i just meant that the talents or ability that he has or the fact whether everyone has some kind of talents was never really explained . I think that these things should have been a bit more explained as the story will be build on this and there are many scenarios that made me feel that the author is rushing things like his background etc . Should have given a bit more importance into it , well it's my perspective and like I said ,I actually like the idea that the author had but guess the execution wasn't of my taste!
VetrageLv15

He means later in the chapters after a side story 3 it goes all over the place like a jump in the story. And the attention to detail disappeared so you literally have no idea what’s going on. Like a place you could not die in now has you die in it. And a weapon appears with no mention how he attained it. It’s like chapters were forgotten.

chaz_mars:how he got the ability. what ability? the talent that everyone has one and his is item drops?
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