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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv51yr
2023-11-05 15:10

I was read the raw for this novel after catching up. This was a very good novel but unfortunately starting from chapter 162 the author messed it up. It's as if another person is writing and some things are just introduced without explaining, MC gains rewards and strength without explaining why, I'm not sure how strong mc is and the enemies he's facing, then afterwards he gets more rewards that also aren't explained. Quite a bit is skipped over and it doesn't even explain how he understood the Perfect concept and became a mythical being. It's really a mess. This novel was very good up to that point, but after the chapter 'God Extra 3' this became trash

Deities: Starting From Goblins

Gray Ashes
3.0
1485 Chs

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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

神祇：从哥布林开始

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EnteralVoid
EnteralVoidLv11

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1yr
TheBro
TheBroLv3

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AzureConqueror:神祇：从哥布林开始
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rodrigo_diaz
rodrigo_diazLv12

true, it was a good concept,but was completely messed up post that, couldn't even read 3-4 more chapters, was just too bad

2mth
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No_no_1796
No_no_1796Lv2

7 to 8 coin chapters its not even worth fast passes let alone coins poor author web novel is strangling them after all this author kept giving 2 in 1 chapter but we novel splits it into 2-4 chapters to maximize coins and then considering most web novel AR full of filler who in there right mind would want to use coins or even fast passes truly sad good potential bad web novel

1yr

Phoeneix
PhoeneixLv14

The author keeps referencing to things that he never explained. Some knowledge from reincarnation? Never mentioned during the story development... Some reference of system drops? Never mentioned why is it different for him then to other players. I think he thought we will just know those background information that should be in the prolog or first chapter without him ever writing or publishing it. The story have potential but the immense lack of world and situation background drastically decrease it's quality. If those are fixed tho, there is potential...

1yr
DaoistscfBvo
DaoistscfBvoLv12

It just doesn't make sense!. Many things are not explained and is the back story of the character and about how he got the ability. I kind of like the idea the author had but feels like the execution is bad. Hope it gets better and adds the missing details somehow.

1yr
MiasmaLotus
MiasmaLotusLv15

honestly love the concept but seems unrefined and kinda confusing to understand .

1yr
TBuschell
TBuschellLv15

any potential this has is ruined by the author constantly begging.

1yr
Winston_Schrumm
Winston_SchrummLv15

The author does not know how to update a story in order and somehow managed to put multiple chapter in a row out of order. The stories also feels like it has devolved weirdly since in the beginning there was a sinicql MC's with the story being about his rise to power from nothing, to a story of a kind guy stuck in a normal cultivation story seeking to cause problems in as many cities as humanity possible.

1yr
Amir_himel
Amir_himelLv13

Raw? Anyone…………. ,)(;$$?(,,,,;;,;;

1yr
WitnessTheHeavens
WitnessTheHeavensLv15

too heavy for my pocket book.had a lot of potential. but when you are paying for a chapter that is just a forum conversation with no relevance you feel cheated. honestly the writer clearly doesn't value the reader. excessive unnecessary information or magically appearing information.

1yr
Nobleran
NobleranLv14

trash in words plus bad translation, poison ahead

1yr
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