The author keeps referencing to things that he never explained. Some knowledge from reincarnation? Never mentioned during the story development... Some reference of system drops? Never mentioned why is it different for him then to other players. I think he thought we will just know those background information that should be in the prolog or first chapter without him ever writing or publishing it. The story have potential but the immense lack of world and situation background drastically decrease it's quality. If those are fixed tho, there is potential...
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LIKEit is mentioned previously that everyone has a talent. his is the system drops. as for reincarnation he never uses any knowledge from a past life or anything so I'm not sure what you are referring to. the only one to be reincarnated that I remember is that one goblin from the wise man world. there are things to criticize about this novel but you are focusing on things that don't seem to actually be issues. the only real issues I've seen in this novel information-wise is that the way the power system is set up is confusing and the terminology for the different types of levels keeps getting mixed up. but even then that's mostly just typos
Yeah he never really explained the system drop thing.And then, the world also needs more explaining. What exactly is the Hyperdimensional Game? What's T Community? What's a community in the first place? and then that place he got his Totem Blueprint, what's the difference between that and the normal Forum? All of these need to be explained properly.I do agree the story has lots of potential though. I mostly understand the basics of these things based on my broad novel knowledge, but actually explaining them will be alot more helpful. And I mostly chalk the bad writing in most novels I read to bad translation of typos, but please try editing the work properly before posting, to make it better for us readers.Aside from these, great novel. And great world background. You have my vote.