Loophus

nope kinda just made it seem like she was going to be in the harem in the beginning and then nope. makes me sad

disappointing

again there ninjas right why is she freaking out

or the fact that no authority showed up to arrest them pretty much says we let them in, then we let them vandalize, and rob then let them run free, but don't worry your business will be the only one to suffer a loss.must be in Cali or something

lol fanficforge is already doing this one your about a week late it's a already on ch30 and It was good ended up dropping this because there to much Harley Quinn after ch15

and goddess

it reads like a tml I can see that there was a lot of correction but I'm pretty sure there a story that is one for one like this only it's was first in English and the system was different along with the powers and the Mc name In my option it's not good

think i might take a rain check on this one until there's a lot more chaps or the chaps get way longer the story is starting kinda slow or fast its really hard for me to tell

na faith wouldn't work for him considering the draw backs with it it would be better if he becomes a natural God through training and just gathering more power

I thought he gained the ability of the servants not summon them why do every DC and marvel fanfic have to summon people from other universe's there's enough characters in DC that there shouldn't even be a need for it in the first place