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Mr_Night
Mr_NightLv51yr
2023-09-20 23:02

Mc's name is Will. His father's name is in Japanese.English name in a Japanese themed story doesn't sit well with me. So it's not for me.

Naruto: Starting in Naruto with Kekkei Genkai

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3.9
53 Chs

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mow
mowLv4

Cringe name for a setting like this.😮‍💨

1yr
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Professor_Light
Professor_LightLv5

wilinosuke, wilojiro, wilimoto, wiluto

1yr
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sangster21
sangster21Lv14

who goes all English in a Japanese focused world that's like saying hey naruto the name's bob

1yr
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Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Um Will was his old name from his previous life. His new name for this life is Kaito. I literally just had to read the first/second paragraph of chapter 1 to find that. Your review is completely off base. I thought he was going around Konoha with others calling him Will by your review. Thankfully I decided I would check for myself. To everyone else just ignore this guy.

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Silkerin
SilkerinLv11

I don't see the issue... I am from a japanese family and I have an Western name as well... So long the name is easy to remember (meaning not a compound name to me) its all ok...

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Mr_Night
Mr_NightLv5

so tell me a western name in Naruto

Silkerin:I don't see the issue... I am from a japanese family and I have an Western name as well... So long the name is easy to remember (meaning not a compound name to me) its all ok...
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Mr_Night
Mr_NightLv5

the author might have changed it, but hi parents were definitely calling him Will

Kamikaze_Eagle:Um Will was his old name from his previous life. His new name for this life is Kaito. I literally just had to read the first/second paragraph of chapter 1 to find that. Your review is completely off base. I thought he was going around Konoha with others calling him Will by your review. Thankfully I decided I would check for myself. To everyone else just ignore this guy.
1yr
Silkerin
SilkerinLv11

lol... Rock Lee, Maito Gai/ Might Guy (depending from which source you read it), Pain, Killer Bee, plus some smaller side characters...

Mr_Night:so tell me a western name in Naruto
1yr
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Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

The author definitely changed it then. I don't recall them ever calling him Will.

Mr_Night:the author might have changed it, but hi parents were definitely calling him Will
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Mr_Night
Mr_NightLv5

wow, they are all western names, congratulation

Silkerin:lol... Rock Lee, Maito Gai/ Might Guy (depending from which source you read it), Pain, Killer Bee, plus some smaller side characters...
1yr
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Silkerin
SilkerinLv11

The stupid sprize is all yours, afterall you are the one who started this for no reason...

Mr_Night:wow, they are all western names, congratulation
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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

killer bee's name in manga made by kishimoto is, Kira Bi, but due to translation they made it "Killer Bee". Pain is just a pseudonym, his real name Nagato. And Might 'GAI' is actually japanese for worth. Lee is prolly the most asian name so no need to explain.

Silkerin:lol... Rock Lee, Maito Gai/ Might Guy (depending from which source you read it), Pain, Killer Bee, plus some smaller side characters...
1yr
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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

give me more then ill prolly agree with you

Silkerin:lol... Rock Lee, Maito Gai/ Might Guy (depending from which source you read it), Pain, Killer Bee, plus some smaller side characters...
1yr
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RothdogTheGamer
RothdogTheGamerLv15

sangster21:who goes all English in a Japanese focused world that's like saying hey naruto the name's bob
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Devil_Gamer_0071
Devil_Gamer_0071Lv2

Mr_Night Go back to sleep. Staying awake throughout the night can cause hallucinations and can affect your mental health. This type of ppl become as stupid as izuku midoriya from bnha

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

I think the Will here is short for Willbert.

Professor_Light:wilinosuke, wilojiro, wilimoto, wiluto
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Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

I think poster's rant is that there are no English names in Naruto. But he probably never heard of Western people Isekai'd on someone else cultures.

Silkerin:I don't see the issue... I am from a japanese family and I have an Western name as well... So long the name is easy to remember (meaning not a compound name to me) its all ok...
1yr
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daydreamer_no1
daydreamer_no1Lv14

just saw this comment and just wanted to say I've seen a naruto fic that had this happen in webnovel and as soon as the Mc introduced himself to a character in naruto as Bob I noped the hell out of there lolol

sangster21:who goes all English in a Japanese focused world that's like saying hey naruto the name's bob
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weeb_versus
weeb_versusLv11

Overall its really good but there somethings Im confused about. Theres a huge plothole around chakra. Its said he had a really small amount of chakra but he can apparently use shadow clones. Same with some jutsus, he uses them easily without running out and the issue is rarely addressed. I also hope that his relationships with his parents and naruto could be explained because for example, he invited naruto to his house and suddenly they are best friends, go to ichiraku all the time and his parents teach naruto everything they know easily, seems kinda unbelievable.

1yr

behind_your_sister
behind_your_sisterLv4

author-san you need to understand that not anyone can get close to jinchuriki and train him & be friends with him....also you are following naruto like dog... this story is same as cannon but added MC that's it a shame it was good at first.................

1yr
marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

This story in a word. SIMPLE. Bruh i was so bored readig this that i simply started thinking about work multiple times. Just isnt worth it. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

1yr
Ertirios
ErtiriosLv4

Who’s going to be the female lead? Hope it doesn’t take long to meet her [img=More pls]

1yr
GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

Dude, I thought he would have a cool and unique kekkei genkai, but it turns out it’s just some kind of trash kekkei genkai, I thought it would be something unique, maybe I expected too much

1yr
jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

MaD Can you please do this Naruto Fanfiction next right after you finish Naruto : Starting in Naruto with a Kekkei Genkai. Naruto harem fanfiction A Naruto fan is reborn as a half-saiyan in Naruto on the night of the kyuubi attack as a baby orphan boy. As the story progresses he will become stronger and find women he will love and protect. Harem Sakura Ino Choji’s Mother Kurenai Yuhi Ayame Mebuki Haruno Madam Shijimi Anko mitarashi Tsume inuzuka Tsunade Senju Shizune Hana Inuzuka Tenten Temari Mabui Mei Terumi Kurotsuchi

1yr
HeavenlyIko
HeavenlyIkoLv15

I like the story at the beginning but when I keep on reading it, I got bored it just like the other Fec, go to school, do missions but I'll wait for more chaps till then good luck 👍

1yr
Murod
MurodLv3

this history has potential , continue [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]

1yr
Nobody770
Nobody770Lv13

It is a good Story please Write further !!!

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