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behind_your_sister
behind_your_sisterLv41yr
2024-03-12 19:17

author-san you need to understand that not anyone can get close to jinchuriki and train him & be friends with him....also you are following naruto like dog... this story is same as cannon but added MC that's it a shame it was good at first.................

Naruto: Starting in Naruto with Kekkei Genkai

MaD
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MaD
MaDAuthor

Kaito helped Naruto become stronger than in the canon, and there have indeed been few changes so far, mainly because the protagonist didn't have the strength or ability to change anything, and most events had already occurred. Making Naruto stronger than the original is already a change, but thank you for the feedback.

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MaD
MaDAuthor

But from the current chapters onwards, changes will start happening.

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Sachet10
Sachet10Lv14

I came here to read about your MC not a slightly more powerful Naruto

MaD:Kaito helped Naruto become stronger than in the canon, and there have indeed been few changes so far, mainly because the protagonist didn't have the strength or ability to change anything, and most events had already occurred. Making Naruto stronger than the original is already a change, but thank you for the feedback.
1yr
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MaD
MaDAuthor

So you can read, the story doesn't focus on making Naruto stronger. He just wanted to help Naruto because he thought he was underutilized. Naruto, being the son of a Hokage and an Uzumaki, and having to rely solely on the Kyuubi to become stronger, was a disappointment.

Sachet10:I came here to read about your MC not a slightly more powerful Naruto
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Sachet10
Sachet10Lv14

Got it

MaD:So you can read, the story doesn't focus on making Naruto stronger. He just wanted to help Naruto because he thought he was underutilized. Naruto, being the son of a Hokage and an Uzumaki, and having to rely solely on the Kyuubi to become stronger, was a disappointment.
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Mr_Night
Mr_NightLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr

weeb_versus
weeb_versusLv11

Overall its really good but there somethings Im confused about. Theres a huge plothole around chakra. Its said he had a really small amount of chakra but he can apparently use shadow clones. Same with some jutsus, he uses them easily without running out and the issue is rarely addressed. I also hope that his relationships with his parents and naruto could be explained because for example, he invited naruto to his house and suddenly they are best friends, go to ichiraku all the time and his parents teach naruto everything they know easily, seems kinda unbelievable.

1yr
marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

This story in a word. SIMPLE. Bruh i was so bored readig this that i simply started thinking about work multiple times. Just isnt worth it. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

1yr
Ertirios
ErtiriosLv4

Who’s going to be the female lead? Hope it doesn’t take long to meet her [img=More pls]

1yr
GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

Dude, I thought he would have a cool and unique kekkei genkai, but it turns out it’s just some kind of trash kekkei genkai, I thought it would be something unique, maybe I expected too much

1yr
jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

MaD Can you please do this Naruto Fanfiction next right after you finish Naruto : Starting in Naruto with a Kekkei Genkai. Naruto harem fanfiction A Naruto fan is reborn as a half-saiyan in Naruto on the night of the kyuubi attack as a baby orphan boy. As the story progresses he will become stronger and find women he will love and protect. Harem Sakura Ino Choji’s Mother Kurenai Yuhi Ayame Mebuki Haruno Madam Shijimi Anko mitarashi Tsume inuzuka Tsunade Senju Shizune Hana Inuzuka Tenten Temari Mabui Mei Terumi Kurotsuchi

1yr
HeavenlyIko
HeavenlyIkoLv15

I like the story at the beginning but when I keep on reading it, I got bored it just like the other Fec, go to school, do missions but I'll wait for more chaps till then good luck 👍

1yr
Murod
MurodLv3

this history has potential , continue [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]

1yr
Nobody770
Nobody770Lv13

It is a good Story please Write further !!!

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