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weeb_versus
weeb_versusLv111yr
2023-11-08 12:18

Overall its really good but there somethings Im confused about. Theres a huge plothole around chakra. Its said he had a really small amount of chakra but he can apparently use shadow clones. Same with some jutsus, he uses them easily without running out and the issue is rarely addressed. I also hope that his relationships with his parents and naruto could be explained because for example, he invited naruto to his house and suddenly they are best friends, go to ichiraku all the time and his parents teach naruto everything they know easily, seems kinda unbelievable.

Naruto: Starting in Naruto with Kekkei Genkai

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3.9
53 Chs

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MaDAuthor

But it was explained that he only had a small amount of chakra when his kekkei genkai had not been unlocked, and about Naruto, it's simple, his parents didn't lose anything in the Kyuubi massacre, and his father is from the same generation as Minato.

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weeb_versus
weeb_versusLv11

sorry about that, must have missed it, thanks for clarifying and sorry for complaining i guess.

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MaDAuthor

Thank you for the review, and great reading.

weeb_versus:sorry about that, must have missed it, thanks for clarifying and sorry for complaining i guess.
1yr
Voids_TrueOverlord
Voids_TrueOverlordLv14

please tell me fmc

MaD:Thank you for the review, and great reading.
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author-san you need to understand that not anyone can get close to jinchuriki and train him & be friends with him....also you are following naruto like dog... this story is same as cannon but added MC that's it a shame it was good at first.................

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This story in a word. SIMPLE. Bruh i was so bored readig this that i simply started thinking about work multiple times. Just isnt worth it. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Ertirios
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Who’s going to be the female lead? Hope it doesn’t take long to meet her [img=More pls]

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GodOfLight
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Dude, I thought he would have a cool and unique kekkei genkai, but it turns out it’s just some kind of trash kekkei genkai, I thought it would be something unique, maybe I expected too much

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jackson_smith
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MaD Can you please do this Naruto Fanfiction next right after you finish Naruto : Starting in Naruto with a Kekkei Genkai. Naruto harem fanfiction A Naruto fan is reborn as a half-saiyan in Naruto on the night of the kyuubi attack as a baby orphan boy. As the story progresses he will become stronger and find women he will love and protect. Harem Sakura Ino Choji’s Mother Kurenai Yuhi Ayame Mebuki Haruno Madam Shijimi Anko mitarashi Tsume inuzuka Tsunade Senju Shizune Hana Inuzuka Tenten Temari Mabui Mei Terumi Kurotsuchi

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HeavenlyIko
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I like the story at the beginning but when I keep on reading it, I got bored it just like the other Fec, go to school, do missions but I'll wait for more chaps till then good luck 👍

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It is a good Story please Write further !!!

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