Item: Dark Magus Returns
Rating: 1
Author: Fersuremaybe_k

Fersuremaybe_kLv109mth

2024-05-03 12:02

the story starts with a character setup but doesn't carry the character onto the "next life" and also baits in with the title and no real magic at the start and works more on martial arts, my advice to author maybe throw more magic elements into the start and flesh it out along with keeping the character younger and not to drag on the bodies problems.

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