So sad about this story so far. Writing quality is 5 stars to be sure but the story and MC is just greatly disappointing. MC is edgy and ridiculously unreasonable due to "past trauma" but it's no excuse for being a dumpster fire. So many criminals base their garbage deeds and personality on "their past". MC is incredibly unlikable and the power system is boring af. So sick of Deus Ex Machina's making an MC's power seriously undesirable. The negative aspects of his power make it trashy and unfun to read. Two steps forward one step back. Author has the mechanical skills of writing but lacks the skill to pull the reader into something that's actually enjoyable to read. Recap: MC needs to die, his power system is trash, cliche overused siscon, and progression is waaaay too slow. Sorry author you clearly have skill but this plot is garbage imo.
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I thought books are supposed to have character development? plot development and story development. The author is very good and I believe that he's developing everything slowly.
he's already lived a life, he shouldn't have too much character development otherwise it is as if he had not evolved in his first life. And in my opinion this is the main problem of all the novels where they talk about Regression\Transmigration\Reincarnation
Dexter_Sled_1111:I thought books are supposed to have character development? plot development and story development. The author is very good and I believe that he's developing everything slowly.
hmm. that's true he lived a life before. but he can learn new things in his new one too
MasterCarlRoy:he's already lived a life, he shouldn't have too much character development otherwise it is as if he had not evolved in his first life. And in my opinion this is the main problem of all the novels where they talk about Regression\Transmigration\Reincarnation
yes, but without it distorting his way of thinking and his way of acting too much
Dexter_Sled_1111:hmm. that's true he lived a life before. but he can learn new things in his new one too
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MasterCarlRoy:yes, but without it distorting his way of thinking and his way of acting too much
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you know.one of the things about living is that we learn things everyday. I can suddenly decide to stop being a talkative and go back to being taciturn because of an Event, so I think that the story deserves a chance.I like characters that change whether from good to bad or vice versa because of something THAT MAKES SENSE.
MasterCarlRoy:he's already lived a life, he shouldn't have too much character development otherwise it is as if he had not evolved in his first life. And in my opinion this is the main problem of all the novels where they talk about Regression\Transmigration\Reincarnation
Were you drunk when you wrote that comment? Because this does not make sense at all.
Dexter_Sled_1111:you know.one of the things about living is that we learn things everyday. I can suddenly decide to stop being a talkative and go back to being taciturn because of an Event, so I think that the story deserves a chance.I like characters that change whether from good to bad or vice versa because of something THAT MAKES SENSE.
I wasn't drunk. let me reread what I wrote
IgnisPrimus:Were you drunk when you wrote that comment? Because this does not make sense at all.
how does it not make sense? you don't learn things everyday?I just said that if character development makes sense the it's allowed. Have a great day.
IgnisPrimus:Were you drunk when you wrote that comment? Because this does not make sense at all.
Now I think you are an alcoholic. Slow down on the beers man.
Dexter_Sled_1111:how does it not make sense? you don't learn things everyday?I just said that if character development makes sense the it's allowed. Have a great day.
sigh.(Because I like something I was called an alcoholic). It is well.
IgnisPrimus:Now I think you are an alcoholic. Slow down on the beers man.
What? I called you drunk because your response to the guy sounded like a mad rambling with weird spelling. You are not missing anything by waiting 1 second more to ensure you hit the spacebar.
Dexter_Sled_1111:sigh.(Because I like something I was called an alcoholic). It is well.
I am optimus prime
sorry sirI'll be more careful next time.
IgnisPrimus:What? I called you drunk because your response to the guy sounded like a mad rambling with weird spelling. You are not missing anything by waiting 1 second more to ensure you hit the spacebar.
Yeah, often authors have a vision on who they want their character to be at the beginning and at the end but they don't do enough to go from point A to point B to make it a believable change or consistent with human nature
Dexter_Sled_1111:you know.one of the things about living is that we learn things everyday. I can suddenly decide to stop being a talkative and go back to being taciturn because of an Event, so I think that the story deserves a chance.I like characters that change whether from good to bad or vice versa because of something THAT MAKES SENSE.
I had fun reading your proper responses. Don’t worry I think the other guy might be drunk not you. Have a good day sirI’ll be giving this book a chance cause so far I enjoy all his books
Dexter_Sled_1111:sorry sirI'll be more careful next time.
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Romolus93:I had fun reading your proper responses. Don’t worry I think the other guy might be drunk not you. Have a good day sirI’ll be giving this book a chance cause so far I enjoy all his books
Read more, the Mc is less edgy later on and also isn’t a siscon
yeah. I guess
Cellphone:Yeah, often authors have a vision on who they want their character to be at the beginning and at the end but they don't do enough to go from point A to point B to make it a believable change or consistent with human nature
