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Wendell_Woodward
Wendell_WoodwardLv151yr
2023-10-12 23:31

The only thing really going for this novel is the writing quality which is honestly a breath of fresh air compared to what this app finds acceptable. But besides that there is a lot to be desired. The mc for someone living his second life does not seem very smart or logical at times and the power system is one of the worst I have seen in a long while.

Dark Magus Returns

JKSManga
4.4
1064 Chs

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JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthor

Hey thank's for giving the story a try, I saw you got up to the locked chapters, so I know you did give it a proper try. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking. Hope if I do write future work's you still give them a try as well :)

1yr
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Hakuna_Sukuna
Hakuna_SukunaLv1

Exactly, this could've been a very good novel if the main char had a little bit of brain.

9mth
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priyanshu_sharma_8649
priyanshu_sharma_8649Lv1

Exactly the main character has no brain. Atleast i wanted to see him develop that with story but no he is a big idiot

2mth
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JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthor

This novel brings a combination of works that I love. Dark Magic/ Not your wimpy MC/ Cultivation and a great sense of mystery. The story follows our broken Raze as he gets chucked into a new world. For those thinking about where is the magic, as the story continues, there will be plenty as the story unfolds. No spoilers, so go ahead and read!

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oscarozo24
oscarozo24Lv13

Reveal spoiler

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one_yoni
one_yoniLv4

JKS is cooking some extra special thing againso

1yr
omitted
omittedLv4

I began reading this expecting a good book, since it was written by JKS, and my expectations were surpassed. I liked the main character from the first chapter alone, and the story has me glued. I binged all available chapters and need more! Highly recommended!

1yr
bredebi
bredebiLv15

Writing Quality is pretty good and World building is very likeable but all characters have a IQ of 60 and the mc 70 and most have a young master complex. Was expecting a old wise ruthless lair mc like Fang Yuan out of R.I. not a 16 year old child with pride issues. why compete with everybody else when you already have the means to make it to the top in your other novels was the mc always on the younger side of things so most problems in character could eastly be talked away as he is still young but older mc are a completely different writing stile like making mistakes and growing becomes a good trait for young characters but awful for older ones like wear is your wisdom from all the mistakes of your past. young and fresh characters change overtime old and weathert ones have already finished their journey their trait to remain calm and navigate any situation is what truly show their age and wisdom why panic when you already know what to do. overall good story with bad characters

1yr
Hezekiah_Lindsey
Hezekiah_LindseyLv2

so many problems. mid at best but i bet this will get deleted

1yr
mymy_9670
mymy_9670Lv3

didn't read the synopsis, just saw the author's name and added to library. it's a fact that this will be good

1yr
King_Wyrtt
King_WyrttLv14

Time for my 75 chapter review. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading several books by this author, but I must say that this one stands out as my absolute favorite. The author skillfully crafts captivating characters that seamlessly fit into a fluid storyline, leaving me constantly craving more. What's particularly refreshing is the unique plot; in a genre often plagued by predictability, this book manages to break free from convention. If you're pondering which book by this author to pick up, I wholeheartedly recommend this one—it's a stellar choice that won't disappoint.

1yr
LIGht_Pen
LIGht_PenLv12

Giving a five star because it's JKS of course! !! !He deserves it! I already love the story . working on my first cultivation novel tooWish me luck sensei !

1yr
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