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Wendell_Woodward
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2023-10-12 23:31

The only thing really going for this novel is the writing quality which is honestly a breath of fresh air compared to what this app finds acceptable. But besides that there is a lot to be desired. The mc for someone living his second life does not seem very smart or logical at times and the power system is one of the worst I have seen in a long while.

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JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthor

Hey thank's for giving the story a try, I saw you got up to the locked chapters, so I know you did give it a proper try. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking. Hope if I do write future work's you still give them a try as well :)

Hakuna_Sukuna
Hakuna_SukunaLv1

Exactly, this could've been a very good novel if the main char had a little bit of brain.

priyanshu_sharma_8649
priyanshu_sharma_8649Lv1

Exactly the main character has no brain. Atleast i wanted to see him develop that with story but no he is a big idiot

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