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RemoWilliams
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2024-05-11 20:24

I am in the early chaps and I am quite impress. Not sure if it is a spoiler because the time travel plot is quite obvious from the beginning. Anyway, your light version of  »all you zombies » is very well written without error on the greatest time travel paradox ever. Just missing the fact that Leyan is a female version of xyaoyun but it would be a complete headache, so I am glad u miss this part.

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Gabichu_Yeah
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I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

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