Ask your questions below...I will answer some possible questions: Is there Yuri?No. Will the Mc get Ntr'ed?Bruh, never. Is this a Harem?Yes, it is a Harem but done differently. Not the Pokemon-catching style. (You will know once you read.) Ask more below and don't forget to point out mistakes...
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LIKEHowever much you can. I tried your Eternal Family novel and it's very confusing and jumbled up.. Also the personalities, behaviours and reactions are very unnatural, while this one really had a good start. Feels much better taking it little by little and keeping it simple than complicating things unnecessarily
FamishedGod:2 chaps a day? Hmm... Let me try! Don't know if I can d it for long tho...image
I was very inexperienced in writing when I wrote EF, honestly, After editing that as a whole, things should change quite a bit, and yes, this novel I plan to go in a slow but not boring build-up.And thank you for all those comments, I hope you give comments in this one too to tell me how the development feels to you!
B0mbaCl0ck:However much you can. I tried your Eternal Family novel and it's very confusing and jumbled up.. Also the personalities, behaviours and reactions are very unnatural, while this one really had a good start. Feels much better taking it little by little and keeping it simple than complicating things unnecessarily
Yes... And he doesn't have a dad; he was born uniquely... Uhm, yeah, that's the gist of things.
Kewl_Enjo:Does he actually have s*x with mom or just admires her too much and does she reciprocate?His dad isn't around? These are my questions cuz like if shes doing her son like and worse dad is around, will skip.