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Still trying to figure out why:1. People pay real money to read novels here2. Everyone is more concerned about content than grammar and repeated sentences, paragraphs, chapters ect.
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THCCULTIVATOR2dReplied to System_DepartmentThat makes absolutely no sense! I think someone's feeding you a nice big plate of B.S. my friend, although it's true that readers want chapter updates the blame most definitely falls on the company in a multitude of ways the main one being the platforms guidelines and template for the stories. ( I could go on but that would take too long) I understand the need to sacrifice quality for quantity but... the line has to be drawn somewhere, you can only have so much poor grammar, filler, sentences and paragraphs that look like someone picked words like they where drawing lots and just tossed them together, at that point your story is no longer a story just random unreadible gibberish.............. Maybe it's just me I like reading stories not gibberish 🤷♂️
- THCCULTIVATOR9dReplied to System_Department
No! No! Bad Author! plz for the love of writing, Do not encourage that backwards nonsense. I'm honestly starting to believe that web novel has no clue what stories, writing, and being an author entails. A synopsis is supposed to tell you about the story! That's like... you know the reason for its existence, not the stories resume. Think of it like this you go to a fast food restaurant but instead of food items on the menu it just has profiles of the employees good luck selling fast food, same concept.
- THCCULTIVATOR13dCommented
I think you mean "laid down on his back" "slept" implies that he was sleeping which doesn't really work for the shenanigans he's about to get into great book by the way keep it up
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- THCCULTIVATOR1mthReplied to KSATRIA
Ok let me start out by saying I love the story and the gramical errors are minimal.... that said I'm so mad right now let me explain I just started Chapter 70 and had to stop reading to pick my wife up from the airport when I returned home after midnight I went to pick up where I left off and wouldn't you know the chapters are now locked[img=Your move] previous and the current one I was reading SMH
- THCCULTIVATOR1mthCommented
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I think there's some confusion the sentence says "bracelets" not "brackets" and for some reason it wouldn't let me comment on the actual sentence so I did the one above it
'Alright! Time to imagine and cook.' - THCCULTIVATOR1mthCommented
get or grow doesn't matter which one but only one is needed
It was a truly terrifying sight. All I could do was stare at the creature in awe and excitement. Finally, I get another real battle. I always get grow significantly stronger when I face a foe superior to myself. - THCCULTIVATOR1mthReplied to Einlion
Honestly at the end of the day it's your story write it how you want, the boo-hoo's about people's dislikes and/or insecurities is irrelevant 🤷♂️ ( more so when they never read the story and are going off the tags) just because it has things like NTR, yandry's or lemons doesn't mean that it's a bad story Things like: Character development, Grammar, World building Etc... are the most important!! readability over content
- THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented"No need for such caution, Mr. Anderson." A male voice sounded in the dark.
- THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
hummmm........ now I wonder? who could this mysterious fierce beauty be?🤔
With her long black hair, piercing ocean-blue eyes, sharp and confident gaze, and a hint of a mischievous smile, the beautiful woman exuded an irresistible combination of fierceness and allure. Her movements were sharp, yet elegant. She looked confident and unapproachable as she stepped closer to the crowd with her gaze fixated on one point. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
It's the whole reason why mankind hasn't evolved.
That is also why mankind desired to cleanse their body and remove the impurities within their body; to grow stronger and evolve. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
moles? I think the word you're looking for is "scars"
Several moles are spread alluringly on his neck and leave an aching memory of his fortunate adventures. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
superman.... marvel.... run kid it's a trap! lol
While Ainz listened, he couldn't help but marvel at her sweet and tender voice, and the way she sang the song, it was the first time he had such a serene moment in his life, in a long time. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
how does she know about superman?
..But superman he'll soon be. - THCCULTIVATOR3mthCommented
That's what you call a "unicorn" So rare that there considered fantasy and myth.
But Rose wasn't stuck on the 'who' or the 'why' of the situation. She was taking her mother's words to heart. She would sit in the number one spot among any women Damien would gain in the future. Not through scheming and deceit, but love and aid. This was the best way to earn her place with him. - THCCULTIVATOR3mthReplied to Spirit_Immortal
- THCCULTIVATOR3mthReplied to DrAssassin17
I know right! I do what I can to help
"We have now arrived at the EIA training base. Cadets are now advised to prepare for disembarkation." - THCCULTIVATOR4mthCommented
well..... on a positive note at least he won't have to finish paying off that insanely high price of the S24
His eyelids closed as his heartbeat and breathing ceased.