Item: My Mother Has a System but Won't Use It
Rating: 5
Author: B0mbaCl0ck

B0mbaCl0ckLv151yr

2023-09-16 23:48

Review after 57 chapters. Good writing style, good grammar, very few mistakes.Good story progression, good foundation, good harem.MC is smart, cunning, cruel and loving with his own. He is very experienced and capable, with knowledge from the future and a vast life experience.The mommy is like a cute squirrel, kind of dumb but in an endearing way, while the 2nd girl is shy and introverted, slowly learning her value and coning out of her shell. The 3rd one is undeveloped yet, but free to get.Story progresses in a step by step basis, without any complicated plots or underlying evils, or rather, the brewing evil is the MC himself, however, he is not guided by revenge but by protection.His purpose is to grow with his family and loved ones, while also helping and gathering the women he held dear in the past.A good read that will keep you reading, by an author who learns from feedback and mistakes. I highly recommend it, as there are no nasty themes like yuri or ntr, or coveting young masters to disturb the story.My advice would be to develop the mother and daughter next, so that the story can get started properly, since we are still in the introductory phase.

My Mother Has a System but Won't Use It

FamishedGod

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FamishedGodAuthor

What a review... Well, that made my day!As for the suggestion, thanks for that too.

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