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So they don’t believe in his ability. Both are at 7th realm, and they still see Mc as inferior.. Such trash women. Only Liu Qingxian is good. Rest are worthless women

Yeah man… such dragged out trash.. really braindead trash novel. Author is retarded

Long dropped it bruh… It was just too dumb of a novel.. and at the point i stopped, they were about to spend 100 chaps just to reach the capital, showing several chaps of every fight against random mobs on the street as if that was fun or something.. Don’t waste your time, author lacks creativity and intelligence.

You write with your eyes on the word count i swear… dragging out every single paragraph with unnecessary words… While your novel is decent, when will you improve on that annoying writing style of yours that goes around in circles and repeats every single description every single paragraph? Can you make it a little bit easier on us readers who have to skim through multiple chapters just to get to the point in a conversation? We’re all paying money here bruh…

Yep. Btw, try to reread your chaps after writing. I saw many typos here and there, which show the rush in writing. There are many free tools to check spelling, and that’s all you need. Free grammarly can also help you if you miss some words here and there. Just some suggestions cause you write well, and your style is authentic, but you type with your toes xD

Hmm, Mc is a bit too skeptical and untrusting. I get why, but he tends to be annoying with how much he overthinks things. And the display of fake pride isn’t that funny tbh… He is a man after all, not a pu55y to avoid contact with women cause he’s some king. In fact, kings shouldn’t protect their v1rginity like it’s their highest treasure, but go for beauties.

5 for encouragement. I hope there won’t be any AI or dragged out smut, and hopefully it will be like the previous one heheh

I’ll give 5 for encouragement. Here’s to hoping this Mc will be more than a gigolo and that he’ll have actually good magic and abilities to fight, and that this world doesn’t normalize Yuri, especially considering their way of reproduction.

Too much smirking. I recommend releasing at most 2 chaps a day, and putting in more effort in the quality of the interactions… the past 100 chaps have been awful, making them a struggle to read through. I’d much rather read slurred english that seems authenthic than this AI processed thing

Nevermind. My reviews are wasted, as the author started generating most chaps with AI, barely putting in anymore effort. That’s why it all sounds so synthetic, cause it is mostly generated by AI.