Honestly, most people will say how it's bad from the two reviews I've seen but all in all it's not too bad. The grammar is fine not the best but understandable. The main character is below average in my opinion. The background is pretty good and I like it though personally I like darker type of main characters and worlds. It's all in all just an average time killer novel that's not too good nor bad.
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LIKEAuthor, if you read this then don't take the other two comments to heart I know for a fact you didn't nerf the main character and its literally quite decent for a novel so keep it up if you want. And I recommend trying to make other implementations of anime moves like you are but more powerful. One last thing, please for me don't nerf kido to the point where it's extremely easy. I recommend you getting the merits then using it to buy the haki guide and then giving it to Nico Robin and her mom so they can learn haki and get decent at it then kido. Please remember to also not give kido to Nico Robin except certain ones since she hasn't shown armament haki at all
Thanks for the review I'll keep it in mind. An above average Main Character how would it be for you?
An above average character would probably be more emotional and developments within the character on how he adjusts to the situations he faces like how he loves and the people are starting to grow on him. The rest honestly is personal preference on the character.
GodaSensei:Thanks for the review I'll keep it in mind. An above average Main Character how would it be for you?
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Upcoming_Region:An above average character would probably be more emotional and developments within the character on how he adjusts to the situations he faces like how he loves and the people are starting to grow on him. The rest honestly is personal preference on the character.
You said that he didn’t nerf yamamoto but he totally did. I mean he can destroy buildings and at the same time punch a whole through wonderweiss with just strength alone soooo. He nerfed him so much he was reduced to being an old man that has the strength of a yonko and devil fruit.
Upcoming_Region:Author, if you read this then don't take the other two comments to heart I know for a fact you didn't nerf the main character and its literally quite decent for a novel so keep it up if you want. And I recommend trying to make other implementations of anime moves like you are but more powerful. One last thing, please for me don't nerf kido to the point where it's extremely easy. I recommend you getting the merits then using it to buy the haki guide and then giving it to Nico Robin and her mom so they can learn haki and get decent at it then kido. Please remember to also not give kido to Nico Robin except certain ones since she hasn't shown armament haki at all
I like the way he did it myself. Instead of him getting all at once he’s gotta spend some time doing it. Plus I doubt he’s gonna be nerfed at all once he actually reaches 100
Uncle_Groudon:You said that he didn’t nerf yamamoto but he totally did. I mean he can destroy buildings and at the same time punch a whole through wonderweiss with just strength alone soooo. He nerfed him so much he was reduced to being an old man that has the strength of a yonko and devil fruit.
Hopefully, it will be as you said. Looking forward to it.
Anthony_Criscione:I like the way he did it myself. Instead of him getting all at once he’s gotta spend some time doing it. Plus I doubt he’s gonna be nerfed at all once he actually reaches 100
