Uncle_Groudon
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Uncle_Groudon4dCommentedAuthor your mc talks like steve irwin or ted bear from cyanide and happiness
"What is that skill lets take a look."- Uncle_Groudon5dCommented
Ahh the ol’mistake some writers do. Double words in most of a pharagraphs.
"Yaawn... another new day huh? man... the "bed" I slept in today was much more comfortable huh, I slept like a rock, huh, oh it's just you ophis, good morning" - Uncle_Groudon5dCommented
7 Dis nuta
'Ban huh, I've watched 7DS so I know he has strong powers' - Uncle_Groudon9dCommented
Heh oh allen there another 100 more dolla gonna be at your house better prepare than not. The system:
[Did I get caught? I could feel a weak connection between 2B and her previous world, perhaps due to her connection with YoRHa, so I helped them witness everything that happened since she arrived.] - Uncle_Groudon11dReplied to Paradox41295
Oh shi that’s actually perfect
Mihawk, however, showed little interest, categorizing it as some sort of Devil Fruit ability or Pokémon power, then walked out with a swagger. - Uncle_Groudon16dCommented
Ahh i know what he feels, good ol days when me and my twin brother were littles.
"Ohhh, twins!" – was their reaction before they began to torture my cheeks. - Uncle_Groudon17dReplied to Uncle_GroudonCh 10 Chapter 10: Training (3)
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I see that the author still hasn’t fixed how you word every paragraphs. Its not that im complaining, its just that it doesn’t hurt to learn a little. Im not gonna lie but im also not perfect but every time i read, i lose some of my brain cell trying to correct some of the paragraphs and sentence. My brain is multitasking to read and correct everything. And im not insulting your English language but im studying italian even tho i already know 2 languages.
Ch 10 Chapter 10: Training (3) - Uncle_Groudon17dCommented
It would be hilarious if those three would be called the hancock sister. Hancock Hancock Hancock Sandersonia Hancock Merigold
Right now environment on the ship is peaceful, The Hancock sisters are enjoying the sun while yoriichi seems to staring at the sword as he thinks of something - Uncle_Groudon18dCommented
I mean he could do the zoan awakening which enhances all the devil fruit to a godly level
"You underestimated my power, Vali," growled Riser, his voice filled with challenge. His fists clenched with determination as he prepared to face his adversary. - Uncle_Groudon25dCommented
it's quite funny to see that none of you all doesn't understand the message behind the chapter 200. author great work and i would like to say that this is a very well written chapter and the message behind it. in all of the fanfic that i have read that other authors made. you were the only one that made a chapter have a message behind it and it was perfectly executed. Well done indeed
Ch 200 200 Marvel Zombie: New doll, the dangerous Makima! - Uncle_Groudon25dCommented
Dark water and white water, so MC can make dirty and murky water and Milk or soymilk water
Yume cleared her throat gaining his attention. [Moving on, let's say you transform into a devil right now. If you use the Element Brand right now, you'll be able to use Black Lightning and Dark Water manipulation. Or if you turn into an angel, you'll be able to use White Lightning and White Water. The reason for this is because, Element Brand is apart of you and adapts along with you.] - Uncle_Groudon25dCommented
In a literal sense its a sacred gear that is overally useless unless the sacred gear itself can upgrade so the user can change from devil to angel without time limit. Just like people said its the downgrade omnitrix with only 2 race
[Before I go into that, I'll have to explain the second Sacred Gear to you. It is called Angel/Devil. That Sacred Gear allows you to change your entire body structure into a pure angel or a pure devil. Once you do, you will have all of the benefits of the angel or the devil if choose one respectively. All though, there is a time limit on this. Once the time limit ends, you will turn back into a human again.] She answered to him. - Uncle_Groudon25dCommented
Basically its a sacred gear that makes you a wizard for the affinity you are more compatible with.
[The first Sacred Gear you unlocked nine years ago. The Element Brand, it's allows you to use the elements you have a potential affinity to. You have an affinity to water and lightning and because of that, you can use it. Because you have been using the powers for years, it should be easy for you to wield. But with the other Sacred Gear, you'll notice some noticable changes.] Yume explained to him. - Uncle_Groudon29dReplied to Phelio_n_Craze
Then answer this: How is she great? How did she obtained that title? When did she obtained it? How was she able to manage zeoticu’s harem without PoD? And many more questions.
Masaki unfortunately didn't inherit the power of destruction but the same goes for Venelana as well. - Uncle_Groudon29dReplied to Phelio_n_Craze
Bro by removing her PoD you just tossed every achievement she has as the brunette ruin princess and the strongest woman of the bael clan of all time to the bin and disrespected her whole being. Its fine of masaki and venelana are cousin but removed her PoD just so she and masaki can be same. Man atleast respect her, you just done her dirty bro
Masaki unfortunately didn't inherit the power of destruction but the same goes for Venelana as well. - Uncle_Groudon29dReplied to Phelio_n_Craze
Sigh im not saying your against feminism. Its just that there’s so much plot hole removing her PoD. Like she should have been hated for not having it like sairaorg. Look at her in wiki, she has achieved everything she has because of her PoD and magical aptitude. remove one and the characters sheet or the whole character will crumble.(any kind of plot adjustment wont save it) Dude you basically destroyed the already perfect characters from the show.
Masaki unfortunately didn't inherit the power of destruction but the same goes for Venelana as well. - Uncle_Groudon29dReplied to Phelio_n_Craze
I think you have problem with women being powerful if you have read the wiki.
Masaki unfortunately didn't inherit the power of destruction but the same goes for Venelana as well. - Uncle_Groudon29dReplied to
Bro that has alot of plot holes like she should have been hated by all the bael clan and probably disowned. Rias and his brother has little chance of inhering the PoD. I mean bro she was called the Brunette ruin princess and you basically took everything from her.
Masaki unfortunately didn't inherit the power of destruction but the same goes for Venelana as well.