One of the best campione ff I've read. Mc's personality is one of my fav things about this ff as he's not a beta like the OG nor does he have a god complex like every other campione fanfic MC's on webnovel.
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I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
what type of god complex? Gilgamesh? 40k God Emperor? Wuxia/Xianxia?
KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
bro in anime the protagonist was average japanese mc who is prude and never really understood what a campione is. if a person can kill god then he can have god levelp complex because it is natural for him to do so and generally in anime it was shown that campiones were eccentric so we can assume that it is part of his eccentricity .
KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.
Eternal_Dragon_God:bro in anime the protagonist was average japanese mc who is prude and never really understood what a campione is. if a person can kill god then he can have god levelp complex because it is natural for him to do so and generally in anime it was shown that campiones were eccentric so we can assume that it is part of his eccentricity .
Sounds like a natural progression as his grasp on normality and conscious limits begins to fade.
KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
You mean justify liking a character. A character doesn’t need justification when it makes sense in context. Like many of the campione.
Maou09:Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.
do you know any other good campione ff?
Dude, are you ever coming back to your fanfic
Maou09:Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.
