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2023-07-28 00:49

One of the best campione ff I've read. Mc's personality is one of my fav things about this ff as he's not a beta like the OG nor does he have a god complex like every other campione fanfic MC's on webnovel.

A Godslayer in a School

Dragon15681
4.7
71 Chs

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KasiCair
KasiCairLv1

I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.

1yr
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Primordial_Two
Primordial_TwoLv5

what type of god complex? Gilgamesh? 40k God Emperor? Wuxia/Xianxia?

KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
1yr
1
Eternal_Dragon_God
Eternal_Dragon_GodLv4

bro in anime the protagonist was average japanese mc who is prude and never really understood what a campione is. if a person can kill god then he can have god levelp complex because it is natural for him to do so and generally in anime it was shown that campiones were eccentric so we can assume that it is part of his eccentricity .

KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
11mth
1
Maou09
Maou09Lv5

Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.

Eternal_Dragon_God:bro in anime the protagonist was average japanese mc who is prude and never really understood what a campione is. if a person can kill god then he can have god levelp complex because it is natural for him to do so and generally in anime it was shown that campiones were eccentric so we can assume that it is part of his eccentricity .
10mth
2
ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

Sounds like a natural progression as his grasp on normality and conscious limits begins to fade.

KasiCair:I don't do reviews. So I will put my opinion about the story here because I like this review. For the most part, and especially at the start of the story, the dude above is completely right. It was an amazing read. Unfortunately, the MC slowly starts to get God Complex. My guess is that the author simply has no idea how to progress so he just does what he thinks sounds cool and it kinda gets obnoxious when *spoiler alert* MC kidnaps Hoshino Ai in the middle of her concert just because he is slightly curious. Or when he starts adding girls to his court just because they fit his 'novel stereotypes'. He barely even talked to Hoshino and instantly added her to his harem. It kinda starts to feel like your usual pokemon gathering harem fic and with how over-the-top MC 'I'll do whatever I want' is acting, it starts to be a bit obnoxious and bothersome to read as I have a harder and harder time sympathizing with the MC. I definitely recommend trying it out, tho. The start is great. And who knows? Some people might like it even after the MC starts acting like a jerk.
9mth
1
ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

You mean justify liking a character. A character doesn’t need justification when it makes sense in context. Like many of the campione.

Maou09:Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.
9mth
1
Mystical_Z
Mystical_ZLv10

do you know any other good campione ff?

6mth
1
BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Lv14

Dude, are you ever coming back to your fanfic

Maou09:Campione are eccentric and some of them can be real jerks, but that doesn't mean we have to LIKE reading about a jerk. There's a reason why the LN follows Godou, instead of a person like Voban. Don't try to justify an unlikeable character.
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A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!

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JoshNeedsAComfort
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SleepingSaint_21
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This fanfic has a good premise at the start. The idea that the MC killed a Chief God of Greek mythology and has all the powers of Zeus is interesting. The first battle when the MC has to fight against Poseidon and have to fight against the other gods from Greek kinda cool and epic In my opinion. I almost thought that this fanfic was a gem until the author introduced heroine characters from other animes and made the pace of the story slow with the slice-of-life and harem genre. It's like I'm watching a Pokemon with the MC catching the heroines. In this fanfic, you will find the MC either lazing around in the club and flirting with his harem or he will spend his time playing around. He thinks of the world as his playground. What is even worse is that somehow there are some flaws with the MC's brain. Why? Like c'mon bro, he spent 15-16 years of his life as an ordinary person, and then when he got the power suddenly his common sense became flaw.

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Fragasile
FragasileLv4

While a crossover slice-of-life with an op MC isn’t anything special or wrong, one problem to be aware of is the portrayal of the characters themselves. Mannerism, wat of speaking, actions, decisions, all of this has already been laid out to you by someone else, just try to emulate it as much as possible. Erica is the most blatant example of this, she’s confident to the point of excessive pridt, yet here she’s lacking certain aspects of her character when compared to the manga/novel/anime. Everyone also suffers from dialogue being too amateurish, not leaving much distinction on who’s who at most times. If it weren’t for writing down who was actually speaking, it falls off in immersion. Writing quality needs a bit of work, a lot of telling rather than showing, makes the dialogue less interesting for sure.

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Cabelinho
CabelinhoLv10

For me it is being one of the best fanfic of campione, the story is very good the plot is good without annoying characters, the personality of the protagonist is good and growing and is adapting A vida de godslayer, the heroines I'm really liking them and their personalities, I expect a lot from this work

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Rohit_Yadav_5054
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One of the best Campione fiction out there

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Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2

It's very good. i like the all part of this fanfic. just the update stability is messed up. Important Note: Author, your devil & Artific fanfic can't be seen anymore. did you delete it or it was banned? If you did deleted it then post it again. Please! It was just getting on the good part. Please!

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Mystical_Z
Mystical_ZLv10

very good ff it feels alot like My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, the chill guy with powers and girls. dk give it a go and youll like it for sure

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Braian_Rodriguez
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Genial, solo espero que mejore el periodo de actualización, el personaje principal es fuerte, casi exageradamente, pero la historia es muy divertida, el mc no es una princesa, sabe lo que quiere, y lo consigue de una forma u otra, los demás saben este hecho, y evitan causarse problemas a si mismos, dandole todo lo que quiere y necesita, la historia está genial, pero los capítulos tardan mucho.

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