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Well, he transformed into a Ghoul. And like, a large majority of Tokyo Ghoul is all about Kaneki learning not to lose his mind and go crazy. I'm guessing insanity is a characteristic of his Ghoul transformation, kind of like Rath's weird speech patterns. MC will probably have to learn how to better control himself while in that form.

She made a vow to her sect not to have sex. This situation would be like if an amnesiac woman with a husband had sex with another man because she forgot she was married. I'm not against her getting with the MC, she should have just been able to make this choice with her memories in-tact. I don't want to compare the MC with Scum Che, but the parallels are very clear.

Okay, but doesn't mean you just hop in that shit after like less than a month of time spent together. This is scum behavior, no excuses.

Killing people isn't really that big of a deal for Marvel Heroes. Most of them have blood on their hands, only Spidey and DD have a real stringent no killing rule. Even in the MCU, most of the heroes their have killed before.

I don't mind him robbing bad guys. Completely draining the bank account of someone like Fisk would do more to hinder him than throwing him in jail. What I'm concerned about is escalation. I hope this doesn't start a slippery slope kind of deal where Peter does progressively more amoral/bad/evil acts until he's no different than the bad guys he beats. That's certainly how a significant number of Xianxia stories develop.

Except if you're pairing him up with Susan Storm. It's okay to cuck Reed. Well, at least Maker-Reed. He's an incel.

No, what you're describing is an animal. What separates humanity from animals is basic decency and self-control.

How old are Rias and Sona supposed to be here? In canon, they are 18 (3rd year in Highschool). Kunou is supposed to be 12 to 13 (1st year of middle school). Since in an earlier chapter you stated Kunou to be 8 years old, that would make Rias and co. around 13 to 12 years old. So either Kunou's been de-aged, or the mc's been hitting on a 13 year old.

So, this story takes place roughly four or five years in the past? Since you made Kunou 8 years old, and she was around 12 to 13 in canon.

Seeing how badly slandered Ron and Dumbledore are in this fic, I can only expect something similar in the future for other characters. Let me guess, Issei's going to be a good-for-nothing lecher who doesn't take no for an answer?