Author added a huge chapter for word count... That is just bad.

Well, you already know how the story will go when from the beginning it is explained that the protagonist is just a toy of a deity with a very low existence (said in chapter 5). The protagonist lacks charisma and half the plot is information about the system and formation. The Fairy Tail world already has many overpowered abilities that are superior to the system, rendering it useless.

This one is good but please let the MC focus on increase his control over mana as it is very important. Also I am a bit confused about the way he uses his gate or soul to form the mana as he can think of other way as it is pretty harmful since everytime he practice he is harming himself and while it will generate resistance to the process it is good to focus on increasing his control other than solely focus on increasing number of skills as it will be useless if he had numerous skills but lack control over his mana and magic. Overall a good read and the world building is good and more realistic.

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Nope on this one buddy, I myself am a amateur author, but I actually slowly improve my writing you however just stick to the jumbled up mess and headache inducing grammar, place get better for yourself and the naive people who actually read this…

Sigh... First of all, I want to congratulate the author for their work. Now, the problem... Too many unnecessary abilities and "cheats." The MC, with a luck stat of 1, still manages to get cheated items 1 out of 2 times (S++). If only they used them. Unfortunately, apart from 2 or 3 abilities with the sword or his "ice magic," the rest is almost never used. This is my biggest issue with this kind of system; the author provides countless abilities or items to the MC, but we hardly ever see them in action... With the story as well, we have the early appearance of God and Mavis, but they don't bring anything concrete to the main plot. Hiding his "power," with all the abilities gained, the author could have simply given it to him through a system mission... In short, it's all too messy for me, especially compared to your last Fairy Tail fanfiction. 3 stars for the word count and update frequency only.

2/5/2/2/2 MC is kinda short-sighted and the writing quality is also kinda bad, why does mc not increase his luck more often when he knows it won't increase with lvl up, its annoying to see him focus so much on strength over intelligence as well.MC also does not train his mana manipulation when he can given that he should be able to do it as long as he has mana even playing around with it should do the trick but NO training is something do when you are in a training ground or fighting so you can get mid fight breakthroughs.

If I could choose 0 stars or none at all I would, that's how much the novel was bad, if the author decides to come back and fix these glaring mistakes then I will gladly come back and read this, because I love gamer novels, but never find any that good besides a few and even then they ruined with their incompetents because they want to be the alpha male in everything and make the system out to be the bad guy or a limiting factor when the "System", I'll say it again, the "SYSTEM" giver the "User" unlimited possibilities.

*sigh, so many people have trash taste nowaday..