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WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv141yr
2023-09-11 05:34

I'm unsure how this is on the popularity list, but oh well. It's impossible to get into the story since the writing quality is god-awful. I've seen mtls be better than this. Not worth the time unless they go back and fix this jumble of words they call a story.

FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH

Jovami6729
3.8
210 Chs

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Soberanoscuro
SoberanoscuroLv4

Friend, if the story is as bad as you say, why don't you leave it directly instead of commenting and embarrassing others?

1yr
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WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv14

You can review a novel poorly for a reason. There is no rule of any sort that says that all reviews must be positive. Anybody who finds writing of this quality a deal breaker will realize it right off of my review instead of having to put up with melting eyeballs.

Soberanoscuro:Friend, if the story is as bad as you say, why don't you leave it directly instead of commenting and embarrassing others?
1yr
37
KamikazeDrew
KamikazeDrewLv5

I find it a deal breaker so thanks for the heads up.

WaitWhoWhat:You can review a novel poorly for a reason. There is no rule of any sort that says that all reviews must be positive. Anybody who finds writing of this quality a deal breaker will realize it right off of my review instead of having to put up with melting eyeballs.
1yr
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Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12

Thanks for the review.

1yr
7
Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

you know what a review section is right? this is not a positive affirmation section. you should review either to give the author feedback, or to warn people what they are getting into if they wanna read.

Soberanoscuro:Friend, if the story is as bad as you say, why don't you leave it directly instead of commenting and embarrassing others?
1yr
18
Darkcoif
DarkcoifLv14

You have saved me time, energy, and brain cells.

WaitWhoWhat:You can review a novel poorly for a reason. There is no rule of any sort that says that all reviews must be positive. Anybody who finds writing of this quality a deal breaker will realize it right off of my review instead of having to put up with melting eyeballs.
1yr
9
Reign_Bloodark
Reign_BloodarkLv5

its actual criticism? if you see something bad and say its bad whats wrong with that? at least this guy said why the story is bad. without criticism how would anyone know what their shortcoming is and what to improve? I for one am glad with this comment as it prevents me from having too high expectation from the high amount of views or avoid it to prevent wasting my time

Soberanoscuro:Friend, if the story is as bad as you say, why don't you leave it directly instead of commenting and embarrassing others?
1yr
5
Jonathan4star
Jonathan4starLv15

Is there harem and how many

1yr
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

The whole point of reviews are so that future readers know what they are getting into

Soberanoscuro:Friend, if the story is as bad as you say, why don't you leave it directly instead of commenting and embarrassing others?
1yr
1
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Android_Elem
Android_ElemLv4

Author added a huge chapter for word count... That is just bad.

1yr

Drako0692
Drako0692Lv1

Well, you already know how the story will go when from the beginning it is explained that the protagonist is just a toy of a deity with a very low existence (said in chapter 5). The protagonist lacks charisma and half the plot is information about the system and formation. The Fairy Tail world already has many overpowered abilities that are superior to the system, rendering it useless.

1yr
Kakarot1809
Kakarot1809Lv4

This one is good but please let the MC focus on increase his control over mana as it is very important. Also I am a bit confused about the way he uses his gate or soul to form the mana as he can think of other way as it is pretty harmful since everytime he practice he is harming himself and while it will generate resistance to the process it is good to focus on increasing his control other than solely focus on increasing number of skills as it will be useless if he had numerous skills but lack control over his mana and magic. Overall a good read and the world building is good and more realistic.

1yr
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

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1yr
HowSinfulOfMe
HowSinfulOfMeLv4

Nope on this one buddy, I myself am a amateur author, but I actually slowly improve my writing you however just stick to the jumbled up mess and headache inducing grammar, place get better for yourself and the naive people who actually read this…

1yr
Knoxuz
KnoxuzLv11

Sigh... First of all, I want to congratulate the author for their work. Now, the problem... Too many unnecessary abilities and "cheats." The MC, with a luck stat of 1, still manages to get cheated items 1 out of 2 times (S++). If only they used them. Unfortunately, apart from 2 or 3 abilities with the sword or his "ice magic," the rest is almost never used. This is my biggest issue with this kind of system; the author provides countless abilities or items to the MC, but we hardly ever see them in action... With the story as well, we have the early appearance of God and Mavis, but they don't bring anything concrete to the main plot. Hiding his "power," with all the abilities gained, the author could have simply given it to him through a system mission... In short, it's all too messy for me, especially compared to your last Fairy Tail fanfiction. 3 stars for the word count and update frequency only.

1yr
AlexCyberHeart
AlexCyberHeartLv2

2/5/2/2/2 MC is kinda short-sighted and the writing quality is also kinda bad, why does mc not increase his luck more often when he knows it won't increase with lvl up, its annoying to see him focus so much on strength over intelligence as well.MC also does not train his mana manipulation when he can given that he should be able to do it as long as he has mana even playing around with it should do the trick but NO training is something do when you are in a training ground or fighting so you can get mid fight breakthroughs.

1yr
DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

If I could choose 0 stars or none at all I would, that's how much the novel was bad, if the author decides to come back and fix these glaring mistakes then I will gladly come back and read this, because I love gamer novels, but never find any that good besides a few and even then they ruined with their incompetents because they want to be the alpha male in everything and make the system out to be the bad guy or a limiting factor when the "System", I'll say it again, the "SYSTEM" giver the "User" unlimited possibilities.

1yr
cafreine
cafreineLv4

*sigh, so many people have trash taste nowaday..

1yr
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