Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
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LIKEI simply hate the fact how Irina, started having feelings for MC. Just the thought of her being arrogant initially to MC while fawning over someone else, makes me feel NTRed. Again the reason why I am so triggered is not because she didn't like the MC from the start, rather it's because she was having feelings for someone and then later on started having feelings for the MC. I personally dislike these kinds of Netori plots ,where the female is having feelings for someone else, while the MC then steals her affection ( intentionally or unintentionally). It hurts my self respect, it's as if you are being desperate for someone else, who's not bothered about you, literal NTR. For me the girl has feelings for MC, or the girl doesn't have feelings for anyone. only then am I fine with MC pursuing her.
pegasus_z0:not yet but the romance is nice.
Its not netori bro. She was never gonna br with ethan.
Ahmed_Hajwani_2999:I simply hate the fact how Irina, started having feelings for MC. Just the thought of her being arrogant initially to MC while fawning over someone else, makes me feel NTRed. Again the reason why I am so triggered is not because she didn't like the MC from the start, rather it's because she was having feelings for someone and then later on started having feelings for the MC. I personally dislike these kinds of Netori plots ,where the female is having feelings for someone else, while the MC then steals her affection ( intentionally or unintentionally). It hurts my self respect, it's as if you are being desperate for someone else, who's not bothered about you, literal NTR. For me the girl has feelings for MC, or the girl doesn't have feelings for anyone. only then am I fine with MC pursuing her.