Ahmed_Hajwani_2999

Why are the dialogues so cringy??

Hey Jackass, your stories are disgusting that even when I get a limited free 24 hour period to read your books, I still don't read them. I hope you don't get any money paid from the Webnovel and live a miserable life, since your nasty books are simply disgusting. The fact you enjoy making such stuff

Chapter 250 was absolutely pathetic. Since MC had experienced how it feels to be bullied for no reason, MC should have stepped in himself instead of doing the BS of Ethan. MC dismisses the Mia, struggles as a human cycle, it's extremely disgusting. All the struggles and all the power ups which MC recieved were because of others who helped him even when he wasn't in a bad situation like Mia. Yet the author had the audacity to attribute all the struggles of Astron to his hardwork. Again I am not saying that he's supposed to be like Ethan, but there needs a level of humanity within him, the same way he showed it to Maya. Sometimes the authors make me so disappointed, which further fuels me to not pay them any of my hard earned money. I'd rather pirate the entire story, read it, if I liked it ,only then will I pay them

Chapter 62. That bitch Kaya was crying like a bitch when it was her daughter who was being threatened as if she was some sorry poor mother, but in the next second as soon as someone else , she was like weak have no choice but to fall to the strong. Fuck that bitch, she should have died at that moment. I hate the Kaya bitch.

hey dumbass, wtf do you mean by not being a harem? I am expecting a proper harem story here. on webnovels if a novel is tagged harem, then it means a genuine harem, not a fake one. So tell me quickly will this be a genuine harem or not. Also add a harem mate sheet with a spoiler tag attached , so that readers can understand which girls will join the harem and which won't. The reason being many times, many readers might like some female character due to her personality and they subconsciously start considering her to be a harem mate, only for her to not be one. This automatically categorises the story as NTR. Especially when the harem mates can be difficult to guess. For example Irina in your novel, technically she's not supposed to join the harem as she already has a crush on someone else while she dislikes our MC,yet things have changed. And something like isn't bad for me I have no problems with more addition to harem. But I absolutely hate the opposite situation where it appeared to the readers that a girl will probably join the harem, only for her to not

I simply hate the fact how Irina, started having feelings for MC. Just the thought of her being arrogant initially to MC while fawning over someone else, makes me feel NTRed. Again the reason why I am so triggered is not because she didn't like the MC from the start, rather it's because she was having feelings for someone and then later on started having feelings for the MC. I personally dislike these kinds of Netori plots ,where the female is having feelings for someone else, while the MC then steals her affection ( intentionally or unintentionally). It hurts my self respect, it's as if you are being desperate for someone else, who's not bothered about you, literal NTR. For me the girl has feelings for MC, or the girl doesn't have feelings for anyone. only then am I fine with MC pursuing her.

She loves him because the plot Armor wanted her to love him 😂. Nothing else. Even Valentina is same

Plot Armor. The most powerful skill 🤡🤡

Hey author, since you don't have any character sheet, I want to know how many in his harem? For now there seems to be only 3, Marline, Seraphine and Luna/Lina. Will there be more? If yes how many (approximately)

The whole premise of this novel isn't suited for a harem lover. If the novel's whole point is to show how the MC got betrayed by the heroines, and then he is making the go through hell for that, then this is complete shit. I absolutely dislike the feeling of getting betrayed/NTRed, and then the whole novel's premise is how MC takes revenge on those beches. What am I getting after that revenge? Nothing. Instead of writing such a novel, the author should have written a novel with no NTR, where the MC's efforts are fruitful along with a happy ending with the heroines, whilst making the son of heaven suffer.