This a very low quality fanfic written by a author who doesn't rally seem to understand the essence of GOT. The MC is an idiot with a very rash mouth and mental problems. almost all his actions are stupid and he is only saved because of the plot armor. He also has a very a problematic mouth and he talks whatever nonsense comes to his mouth. If this was the real GOT or if it was written by a skilled author, idiots like this MC with loose mouth will be the first to die. after all, words coming out of a persons mouth are so important in GOT that even a dwarf like Tyrion became an MC solely based on his words and the same goes for the Onion knight. One thing the author got right is the Theon's character from tv series - He is an idiot in both the TV series and this fanfic.
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Is it that bad ?
who care about this?
Typical pathetic reader who likes to see the mc get stepped on by any character... frankly guys like you must love NTR.
I have a lot of sympathy for dumb people. take care
I see, you use yourself as an example.
I don't understand where you got them liking the mc to be stepped on from "running his mouth". Not only that, but a smart character would do or say the politically correct thing in public and then do some stuff in the background, almost like real politics.
No matter how much sympathy I have, I am not wasting my time on you. So I will ignore your deranged rambling from here on. I heard some charitable organizations help people like you for free. you better approach them instead of trying to waste both our time my friend. Good luck. Hope you will regain your sanity one day.
I liked it and I think you should give it a try: Read atleast 15 chaps before deciding instead of deciding to miss out on the fun while listening to some idiots cuz I nearly did and hope you won't until you try it on your own
people, first impressions are important, expecting people to swallow 15 chapters of bad writing for the expectations of a good story that may not be true is not appealing in any way to new readers.
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Agreed, when I see comments saying you need to read over a dozen chapters before it gets good just leads me to believe that the stockholm syndrome set in on the person in question.
u must be paid or some ratard.. the guy in first chp tries to pick a fight with Jofferey the psycho who should be able to swat this fly of a mc..thats the quality of this junk..
Yes, that's why the best option is to hang your head like a mouse, now I understand why failed protagonists are popular, readers like you want a protagonist to identify with.
"Typical pathetic reader".....the irony
wanna op arrogant(headstrong??) mc? then that needs a cheat/reason that he is op...in here it's just plot armor....i think that's what the OP meant.
U sound stupid
No es tan malo, ademas se explica en reiteradas ocaciones que la persona reencarnara y Theon tienen conflictos, asi que ninguno domina el cuerpo en si mismo. Ahora llegue hasta el capitulo 32, y puedo decir que el MC es magnifico, tuvo una gran evolucion en tan pocos capitulos
Your idiocy has been answered by our fellow readers............hope you read their replies and cure yourself.
Yeah, ignore the idiots and avoid this fanfic, the MC dies I'm chapter 44 anyway and gets replaced with an oc.
