Eddicted

wooow. This chapter can be a hallmark for lazy writing. The villain who is in the final step of killing the MC just decides to leave because he heard a loud fighting very far away. even more dumb is the villain assuming that random person involved in fighting very far away in the middle of the forest is utterly nonsensical

World build is not bad. The MC is dumb as hell though. Apparently the author thought character progression means making the MC a half retard and then slowly bringing him back to normal human standards. Simply put lazy writing.

Your idiocy has been answered by our fellow readers............hope you read their replies and cure yourself.

Just the first chapter is enough for anyone with a good brain to realize that the MC is a fool and that the author doesn't really understand the intricacies of human society. This kind of combination will irritate mature readers to no end.

This author tried to write something great but ended up with this messed up result. The power system is not explained properly and you get the feeling that the author tried to revise his idea of the power system many times. Overall I felt that the author wrote this story by thinking in the spot with zero planning for even the next chapter.

At which chapter did this happen

MC is turning out to be Righteous mentally deranged Naruto with Suicidal tendencies

On the contrary, MC is turning out to be Righteous mentally deranged Naruto with Suicidal tendencies

The MC likes to whine a lot (blames the cruelty of the world and himself like a fool) and the author is very good at milking it. The MC does nothing but whine and cry for 10 continuous chapters.........🙂🙂 And those chapters don't even contain much other stuff than his whining.

are there any supernatural or fantasy elements in this novel