Honestly, the story started off well, but went downhill once the mc entered the academy. Here are a few problems. 1 Some rules of the setting change slightly to resemble those found in cultivation novels, such as the rules with the clans in the village. I'm thinking about something specific here in my mind, but it perfectly encapsulates the problem with low quality chinese naruto fanfics, where random xianxia logic and terms are inserted into otherwise unrelated worlds. 2 The potential harem, as well as forced simping. What I mean by that, is that the author is constantly making other characters and even the narration itself praise the main character. And his slight romance/harem seeking doesn't fit in with what his apparent goal is. Unless the (reminding you, chinese) author is actually competent and this is an elaborate scheme to get the hyuga bloodline, this is written purely to get all the coomers happy, the author being one of those very same coomers.
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1.I try to replace or remove the random xianxia logic, however in some scenarios I’m forced to leave it in because if it were to be removed I would also need to remove the next 1-2 paragraphs as it wouldn’t make sense. 2. The simping part I can’t really remove as it would conflict with the plot.
Yeah, it's just coomer appeasement. Current lineup looks like ino, hinata and karin.
Well, as the translator, you're not at fault. The review is like 99% about the og author.
Plot? Hahhhahahhahhahaha. Its a Chinese fanfiction. Half of the plot is the main character saying are you courting death.
Its one of the reasons why I hate and like Chinese Stories, it's so cliche and annoying that it sometimes makes me laugh. Although it does get annoying when the same thing happens in almost all Chinese Novels.
Is there romance?
understandable have a great day
what do you expect in a Chinese fanfiction ...
Also, you claim to not like h#rem and romance ...so you should have read the tags before?it seems like a waste of time or masochism to read something you hate seeing your review
I swear to god, you harem defender brainlets always pop up in these situations and I always have to explain. When I started reading, this had no harem tag on it. Author only added it after I made my review, to make sure he doesn't attract the wrong readers again. Normally, I would skip past novels with harems, but if you have a harem without the tag, I pretty much always leave a pretty bad review, cuz they wasted my time.
is this about the.... ? 😆
Still makes you dumb
Also that's just BS
Nah, bro's ego got bruised and he can't admit fault. Go back to jerking off to letters. That's the only thing you're good for.
jerking off to letters ? oh , I get it ...you're one of those well no point in arguing with you then
And you think you're smart?...What a fool.
Just leave them alone man, you just made the Harem Readers look bad and brain dead
it seems to me that you're the ret@rd here, read my comment again ...the argument already ended when I replied "no point in arguing with you then to op"tf are you barging in it for ? trying to be a smart@ss?
What a rude person, I'm just spitting facts and u just call me Ret@rd?? Heh, as expected from your people
