Eno_Banahene

But didn't the creation God say that the luminous were to defend naiam from destruction If so what makes them special is it their experiences or something else

I think you are going a bit too fast we did not see how he met musashi but you can fix this by saying they are drawn to each other due to whatever you think is right Another thing of note is you have not gone into detail about their abilities only the mc which I do not believe the story was truly based upon it was a clash of philosophical ideas

Atenzi is the necessary evil,the executioner not what the the people want (AM saying nonsense)but what they need.

Magnificent brother I prayed and you were the result

I believe in you author I want to see which philosophy stands true or maybe none at all

Author I hope you will not be too lenient on mc the story should be unpredictable that any of the 2 God's might win it should not be predictable like other stories on the platform PLS stand out

Keep it simple it has already been done

Is author foreshadowing something

Imagine if author killed shoko then that will truly the the jujutsu kaisen

imagine if author killed shoko he will be the second coming of gege