Devil fruit's are associated with the soul, its canon, you got rid of the spiritual pressure without research. Additionaly a lot of paragraphs you write start with "I (something)". You need to stop before making it public and to read your own chapters in one go to see the flow, and to start writing with realism and inmersion in mind, for the characters, that is real life for them. If a bully comes to hit me, and suddenly a guy full of tattoos comes and hits him, that does not make it a good guy, it just makes two bad guys in that moment, nobody will become "inspired" or "change a little" because of "something" that persons says, and more ridiculous, you think that in a fight in a highschool, the students in the hallway will not be screaming allowing the MC to "monologue" and listen, teachers will not meddle, parents will not get involved and things like that. Absurd.
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I didn't take away spiritual pressure. He can't just use it to supress other people. If he walks with the spiritual pressure all the normal people will have their souls crushed.
Devil fruit is associated with soul? *turns to another monitor with wiki on linage factor* Are you sure about that?
Yes, the lineage factor is only part of the devil fruits, and the full scope of the artificial fruits, you can look in the wiki information about the netherworld, and the Information about brooks fruit, among other fruits which revealed that fruits are a part from you, not your body, you only need a bite to obtain the power of a fruit, and the rest of the fruit will not give anybody any powers, if you want more information, you can check Oda's Q&As
ZaweRD:Devil fruit is associated with soul? *turns to another monitor with wiki on linage factor* Are you sure about that?
Devil Fruits=Sacred Gears
