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DetachedDreamerLv141yr
2023-06-23 12:13

A story filled with over the top tragedy thst tries to instill darkness as the norm, trying to force us to accept there is no light. The author is possibly a trans because they don't know the difference between man and woman. takes 2 mins to proof read but this author doesn't care enough. he/she is pretty easy to differentiate and correct. Another fanfic that kills off the parents. twice in this one. cliche, boring, and leaves zero emotional impact on the reader. to be honest I couldn't get past chapter 5 because all the inconsistencies.

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MastariusLv2

you should tone down the weed intake

DetachedDreamerLv14

nah

Mastarius:you should tone down the weed intake
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DemonVenerable_12Lv1

I disagree, it's certainly a masterpiece if you compare it to any other ASOIF/GOT fan fics. I skipped it after reading this guy's comment but later gave it a try now I'm giving this review after finishing volume 1

Gabichu_YeahLv3

You're right bro, the MC killed his father for an illogical decision in the last chapters, it stinks of a masochistic Ice and Fire fan who loves to kill characters after making us get attached to them. I envy you for stopping reading this in time.

Lore_GamingLv4

I just don’t like the idea of him wanting the free folk to Bend the knee to the starks I hate it he has no respect for them. Not only that he works so hard just to leave that place he built ? He is ok with killing people so that mean he isn’t soft. Idk I just hate writers who put their previous emotion into their writing I get it u like the north but y would the MC just give them a everything he worked so hard on ?

DemonVenerable_12:I disagree, it's certainly a masterpiece if you compare it to any other ASOIF/GOT fan fics. I skipped it after reading this guy's comment but later gave it a try now I'm giving this review after finishing volume 1
Lore_GamingLv4

Ya I dropped it on he minute I heard him say he wants to go to the other side of the wall n be one of the starks bannermen. Free folk don’t bend the knee. I can just tell this guy is a stark fan boy lol

Gabichu_Yeah:You're right bro, the MC killed his father for an illogical decision in the last chapters, it stinks of a masochistic Ice and Fire fan who loves to kill characters after making us get attached to them. I envy you for stopping reading this in time.
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