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2023-06-21 21:16

It's a pretty good story. Sometimes it feels like it's been run through a translation software or AI cause it mixes up people's pronouns all the time and makes it pretty confusing. Also, besides his intellect, the MC really isn't anything special enough to warrant making him partially a white walker. He grows faster and is a little strong but he has shown zero desire to fight and battle and has no magic besides his naturally cold skin. IDK, there's bound to be lots more to this story but so far it's pretty lackluster tbh.

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