The book started off good with a good plot. Then, the author decides to scrap the original plot after 38 chapters for something completely different. Many things are just randomly added and then taken away, the same with characters. Many characters have the same name. The name of this story should be changed to something else because goblins only take 1 female. Says Earth was selected, and billions of people "joined the game," yet it seems like the heroes were there before the dark lords since some were already very prevalent to the "NPC's." The whole game aspect was pretty much thrown out the window in the new plot with some of its features returning only when the author deems it necessary. The tag says R18, so I understand you will have NSFW scenarios, yet when the new plot started, it was like that in every other chapter, and then you stopped doing that. A good part of the beginning of the new plot timeline, most chapters had many repeated pages and paragraphs. In many instances in the story, the MC makes no sense in doing things. He will go on an adventure, find someone, bang them into submissions, take them home, bang them again, then deny that person from following him because it's to dangerous yet take someone weaker with him to make them stronger only to repat the process. Many of the characters are bland and have really no impact other than when they are needed, disappearing randomly, only to be written back into the story when the MC needs their help with something.
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