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DaoistLwCnMT
DaoistLwCnMTLv41yr
2023-10-23 20:06

(this is review after 100 completing chapter.i have also made a review on this at 70 chapter.) There are like R*PE scene in every chapter every time the mc meet any women he R*PE her and the mc is became a rank in just 100 chapters and now what everything(weapon, enemy, skills) from now on here is gonna be s,ss,sss rank.the story is following the same just the mc is evolving what about others the author is only showing the mc side and not truly showing other side charcter.Now the story is gonna be same strong enemy will come mc defeat him and become more powerful and it will be repeting.

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Reverendbonafide
ReverendbonafideLv12

mm past 200 - 275 the roles are reversed Ethan is now a weakling that gets slapped around by pretty much everyone. It's almost like the story has started from the beginning.

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Thats bad...

Reverendbonafide:mm past 200 - 275 the roles are reversed Ethan is now a weakling that gets slapped around by pretty much everyone. It's almost like the story has started from the beginning.
Lestda
LestdaLv15

that's drop material dude, why? I was about to read it and now is a No-no...

Reverendbonafide:mm past 200 - 275 the roles are reversed Ethan is now a weakling that gets slapped around by pretty much everyone. It's almost like the story has started from the beginning.
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Blazzing18
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I JUST GOT DONE READING CHAPTER 103 AND I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK BUT THERE R SOME THINGS THAT I THINK THAT SHOULD BE FIXED!!! I REALLY HOPE THE AUTHOR READS THE COMMENTS AND AT LEAST THINKS ABOUT WHAT IS SAID IN THEM IF NOT ACTUALLY MAKES THE CHANGES!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND ITS GOING GREAT SO FAR I JUST HOPW THAT IT GETS SOME OF THE THINGS IF NOT ALL OF THE THINGS GET FIXED AND THIS WAY THE BOOK BECOMES EVEN BETTER!! AND IF THE MC IS TO MOVE BECAUSE HE NEEDS MORE ROOM I HOPE HE WOULD BE ALLOWED TO TAKE ALL OF THE RHINGS HE PUT DOWN ALREADY FROM THE SYSTEM AND I HOPE HE STARTS TO GET MORE QUESTS FROM THE SYSTEM SO HE CAN GET MORE THINGS FROM IT AND I BELIEVE HE SHOULD START TO TAKE OUT MORE DRAK LORDS TO GAIN MORE RESOURCES SO HE CAN RISE HIS RANK AND BECOME STRONGER AND THIS WAY HE CAN FIND AWAY TO HELP ALL OF HIS WOMEN TO LEVEL UP AND BECOME STRONGER TOO!! I REALLY HOPE THE AUTHOR SEES THIS AND READS IT AND PUTS ALL OF THIS INTO ACTION OR AT LEAST USES THESE IDEAS TO PUT THINGS IN THE BOOK TO HELP THIS WAY ITS NOT EXACTLY WHAT IS WRITEN BUT AT LEAST THE IDEA WAS USED!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO THE BABY PHOENIX AND THE BABY DRAGON??? HE NAMED THE PHOENIX BUT NOT THE DRAGON!!! AND WHAT ABOUT THE BIG PHOENIX WHERE IS HE??? Y HAVENT U LET HIM AT LEAST GO OUT AND FLY HIGH SO NO ONE CAN SEE HIM SO HE CAN STRETCH HIS WINGS SO THEY DO GET TO THE POINT WHERE THEY DONT WORK ANYMORE!!!! AND WHAT ABOUT THE KIGHT GIRL WHAT HAPPENED TOCHER AND THE REST OF THE GIRLS!!!??? Y WOULD HE NOT COMBINED FORCES WITH THEM ALL AND BUILD 1 BIG BASE THAT BASICALLY BECOMES A KINGDOM FOR THE DARK LORDS AND HEAROS THAT R WITH HIM AND HAVE HIM HELP THE GIRLS POWER UP AND ALL THE TROOPS THAT EVERYONE HAS!! AND Y ID HE NOT PLAYING OR EVEN SPENDING TIME WITH ANY OF THEM!!!??? AND HE SHOULD BE SPENDING THE MOST TIME WITH THE KINGHT GIRL AND THE BABY PHOENIX AND THE NEWLY BORN BABY DRAGON!!!

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