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2023-10-22 23:36

(THIS REVIEW IS AFTER COMPLETING 70 CHAPTERS SO ANYTHING AFTER THAT IS I HAVEN'T READ) Bro you should also tag it as harem.it is an awesome series I love it but i think you should introduce more dark lord because there are like 100 or 200 heroes at a same time but there are roughly 15 or 20 dark lord

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