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Gaming_shadowsLv31yr
2023-09-17 09:10

Love this book and how the book is focusing on the mc and not really speaking about harry other than the beginning of the book where mc becomes his friend also love how the author built up the story and the whole world in the book as it adds a ton to it, if someone is looking to read HP book i would highly suggest this. I really hope the author keeps going with this book as its really good and the author seems way to good at writing books in my opinion

Harry potter: The ringmaker

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Boroxx
BoroxxLv11

Good story idea and well written, but sadly like many other Harry Potter fics this one has just too much Harry Potter in it. While this might sound weird but while i love everything about the Potterverse but absolutely loathe the character Harry Potter himself. And this story seems to be going in the same direction as a great amount of other HP fics where its quickly evolving into "Harry Potter + sidekick OC" instead of a "OC in the Potterverse"

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The MC pulls a lot of information out of nowhere and takes it for granted, like declaring Dumbledore a villain for reading the books, along with theories and explanations of how magic works that he took from the beyond and again took it for granted. I see no problem with writing an AU fic or having a manipulative Dumbledore, but the MC declaring this kind of thing out of the blue is a problem. Events are often summarized in a paragraph and then sometimes we have information coming out of the blue about something extremely important that happened that was not even mentioned in that summary. The fic spends more time with the MC making theories or thinking about fanon as if it were canon than actually acting. Other details like a police officer finding the MC extremely bruised, bloodstained and without memories taking him walking to the police station instead of to the hospital or calling an ambulance, the MC going to school a week after being sent to an orphanage with aminesia and even with injuries all over the body show that the author does not make much effort to build a reasonable story.

1yr
Taco_Burrito_5711
Taco_Burrito_5711Lv4

I was reading this trying to figure out why it was so well written so far... and realized I've read half the other stories this author has posted and thought 'yeah that makes sense'.

1yr
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

sorry but the mc announces too much info that he shouldn't have, and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly, I drop the story (chapter 30) it's not consistent enough with the world of HP (and the mc is stupid)

1yr
uSeer
uSeerLv5

Reveal spoiler

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ThibeauAsura
ThibeauAsuraLv4

Like some Others, I love the idea of the story. But most of what is written is just a summary like "they had a pleasant chat". I am also not a fan of how many assumptions the MC makes about things he has no concrete evidence about. It was not my cup of tea, but for others, It might be. I hope your fanfiction does great but it wasn't for me.

1yr
James_Horn
James_HornLv4

I thought the story was great in the beginning but then it got progressively worse as I kept reading I mean come on making the world revolve around him I read so many books like that and what the all have in common not many people like it

1yr
asaade9999
asaade9999Lv3

each chapters is just a summary and there's no actual story in it, like when harry and the MC are actually talking in parseltounge but it only shows in the summary of what happened to him in that day, such a trashy writing

1yr
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

It's name should be like "Harry Potter and the garbage side character". Maybe that's too much recognition of the main character it should just be harry potter and maybe just add the MC's name by the end in side notes as small as possible.

1yr
Dopaminados
DopaminadosLv3

I've seen all 177 chapters released, if you want a potterverse fic where there's not much fighting and everything works out this is for you,there are a lot of useless chapters that serve only to fill up the number of chapters, everything absolutely everything works out for the MC, he has no difficulty with almost nothing and finally a personal inconvenience for me,He's very nice to the point of being hypocritical, he has no goals or anything he's just following canon and wanting to save everyone he was a fan of, I'm not asking for a villain I'm asking for a human

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