Gaming_shadows

Surprised your saying you aint fluent in English as the story is really written well compared to other story's i have seen, pls keep up the good work author cant wait to read more

So glad i stayed to read the story and didn't drop it as my interest has definitely increased, Cant wait to see what else you write

Also The author tries to add to the story that even though the MC is underage he can sign legally binding Contracts without a guardian present that basically say goblin inheritance laws overrule wizarding inheritance laws in this case of the MC's inheritance, meaning if the goblins ever decide they dont like the mc they can make us rules that strip mc of his claim to his Bloodline and no one can oppose the goblins

Author you do realise that the written acknowledgement could never be legally binding due to Mc being under age and not having a Guardian present and that even if it could be legally binding, the fact that it is about goblin law being superior to wizarding law makes it void as no way wizards especially purebloods would let this slide ever and they would use it as a excuse to claim goblins want to rebel again

Dont bother reading as Author somehow has made it so that Wizards have given goblins full control over inheritance things meaning someone could have the blood of a ancient house in them and be the last heir alive but goblins can turn around and say no we don't give you permission to be the heir and just not let you gain said house, Author has no real way of explaining why they can do this without breaking the story as no way Purebloods would allow goblins to have this power also the book somehow makes it so that random wizards buy stuff of Mc rather than verified shops even though they don't know who Mc is right in front of shops that sell what the Mc is trying to sell

Going to start this of by saying i hope author makes more books as the writing quality and world building are both great. The writing and updates are great but mc becomes God in chapter one meaning he wont grow as a person nor does he go from weak to strong, He could wipe out anyone he wants meaning good character development will be very hard due to MC being a god and his souls age being very high, there is also no possible way for this book to get past chapter 30 and being a good read due to mc being able to solo the entire story, Mc can also learn and master everything within a second so it wont even be interesting to see him interact with the villains when he can wipe them out with a thought, If the Mc had to slowly get the knowledge from the system as he grows up or hits milestones then it would be 5 stars but because he gets all the knowledge of the universe by chapter 5 its not and the only reason i don't rate it one star is because of the quality of the writing and background for the older Harry's world

You could use the fact that its a LOTM Power System and say some of the materials for the potions are only available in the LOTM world and not Earth Prime Which would give a reason he cant just make them

The way mc lost his abilities felt way to forced, would understand if mc found out the power from this world and decided to exchange his current powers for it instead of his powers being ripped from him as soon as he spawns in the world, i will still continue to read to see what you plan on doing and i love the book

One of the best Naruto stories i have read in a long time cant wait to see how it progresses and ends, Hope the author keeps writing this and makes more books like this using other characters in the Naruto world

no idea why the author doesn't just give a quick explanation of what's in the book like "the book mentions how plants work and some safety for them, it also includes muggle references plus some revolutionary stuff thanks to his idea from his knowledge of the future muggle world" that's all we need not about 8 chapters of what's in the book as we all gonna forget about it in a about 20-30 chapters