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Sir_FrogLv11yr
2023-05-06 06:54

The story is conveluted to the max. There are too many plots going on at the same time. The story also jumps around to much. One chapter your in the beginning, the next your're 6 months into the world. it skips too much, and there are too many things happening at once

Marvel: Reborn as Moon Knight

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4.7
18 Chs

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White_Wolf_7506
White_Wolf_7506Author

I hope you guys like it. It is my first try at writing so do give me some slack while reading it.

1yr

Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv2

Overall, amazing idea, good writing style. Amazing potential in the story. I hope you continue writing. I will just say to anyone planning to read this fic, the idea is amazing. The execution is set to improve by the coming chapters for sure. The writer has a good sense of direction as to where the story is going and a lot of elements are coming together as the chapters go on. Will definitely recommend reading. The only gripe is with the formatting which hopefully will improve as the story goes on.

1yr
R_Canton
R_CantonLv14

As someone who owns over 300 DC graphic novels, and has never once picked up a Moon Knight book (or seen the show), I did not once have to question the abilities of the character. The author has a great idea of where they want the story to go. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Theroxis
TheroxisLv14

Out of all the mentally stable and infinitely better choices out there, WHO tf wants to be Moon Knight?

1yr
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

Too many story plots moving at the same time makes the fic convoluted .It feels more like a diary entry then a story narration .

1yr
Di_Scipline
Di_SciplineLv4

[CH:15] A pretty solid read. It's not your usual system or gacha Marvel fic. The book has its own unique elements, Obviously the mc with moon knight powers and presence of Ghost Rider(imagine the Avengers with ghost rider, that would be dope). Anyway the writing quality and world development is done well. The conversations and character designs are decent 👍. I don't know about updating stability since this is a relatively new fic and i just binged through it. Hope the author will not drop this gem halfway ,Looking forward to reading more interesting and fun chapters. All the best 😁🙌

1yr
Enderman_
Enderman_Lv2

Extremely Good. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr
Sinbau
SinbauLv12

Ngl the title did catch my eye- Quite awhile ago I was watching The Moon Knight’s series so seeing this book did catch my eye and to no avail it did not disappoint! The author did a good with world building and setting the tone at the beginning if anything there are only a few grammar errors like hard to read sentences but with that aside I am liking the story! I enjoyed the authors narration style as well as their choice of describing a scene or even the dialogue as well. Either way keep up the good work author!

1yr
Affe_Te
Affe_TeLv4

It's been great so far, I highly recommend it. Honestly I would love to see more interactions between the characters and would love to know if there will be romance in the future. I would also like to say to try to be more focused on the powers of the moon knight or if you are going to give a Power up, do something related to the moon because these fanfics where the protagonist starts as a super power and ends up full of powers, a mage with some jewels from the infinity with various technological weapons and robots is very strange and bad, just like that fanfic of the wizard spider man making his utopia in the mcu, it gets boring. P.S : no harem (in my opinion, but you are the boss author). (and I used the translator).

1yr
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