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Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv22yr
2023-05-01 04:05

Overall, amazing idea, good writing style. Amazing potential in the story. I hope you continue writing. I will just say to anyone planning to read this fic, the idea is amazing. The execution is set to improve by the coming chapters for sure. The writer has a good sense of direction as to where the story is going and a lot of elements are coming together as the chapters go on. Will definitely recommend reading. The only gripe is with the formatting which hopefully will improve as the story goes on.

Marvel: Reborn as Moon Knight

White_Wolf_7506
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SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

I m trusting your review. I will be back after reading it.

2yr
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Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv2

Lmk what you felt.

SkyNeves:I m trusting your review. I will be back after reading it.
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SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

It was good(caught up) but it feels too fast pace, not that that's bad but it doesn't showcase the development of him as a character and vigilante and of the things around him. It's like a recap(don't know the correct word to use here) with minir development happening on each chapter. It's still good and I liked some of the things that happened on the book but didn't like others.

Writers_Ablood:Lmk what you felt.
2yr
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Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv2

I suppose we should let the author develop the story more. If you really analyze the story, it's similar to the tv show as we had no backstory for the first few episodes.

SkyNeves:It was good(caught up) but it feels too fast pace, not that that's bad but it doesn't showcase the development of him as a character and vigilante and of the things around him. It's like a recap(don't know the correct word to use here) with minir development happening on each chapter. It's still good and I liked some of the things that happened on the book but didn't like others.
2yr
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SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

To me it was okay since I haven't seen the series so I went full blank besides the knowledge I have of other comic book characters and some MCU stuff. But I'll see how it goes but I would still recommend.

Writers_Ablood:I suppose we should let the author develop the story more. If you really analyze the story, it's similar to the tv show as we had no backstory for the first few episodes.
2yr
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Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv2

Good to know my review wasn't baseless. Nice

SkyNeves:To me it was okay since I haven't seen the series so I went full blank besides the knowledge I have of other comic book characters and some MCU stuff. But I'll see how it goes but I would still recommend.
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White_Wolf_7506
White_Wolf_7506Author

I hope you guys like it. It is my first try at writing so do give me some slack while reading it.

2yr

R_Canton
R_CantonLv14

As someone who owns over 300 DC graphic novels, and has never once picked up a Moon Knight book (or seen the show), I did not once have to question the abilities of the character. The author has a great idea of where they want the story to go. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Theroxis
TheroxisLv14

Out of all the mentally stable and infinitely better choices out there, WHO tf wants to be Moon Knight?

2yr
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

Too many story plots moving at the same time makes the fic convoluted .It feels more like a diary entry then a story narration .

2yr
Di_Scipline
Di_SciplineLv4

[CH:15] A pretty solid read. It's not your usual system or gacha Marvel fic. The book has its own unique elements, Obviously the mc with moon knight powers and presence of Ghost Rider(imagine the Avengers with ghost rider, that would be dope). Anyway the writing quality and world development is done well. The conversations and character designs are decent 👍. I don't know about updating stability since this is a relatively new fic and i just binged through it. Hope the author will not drop this gem halfway ,Looking forward to reading more interesting and fun chapters. All the best 😁🙌

2yr
Enderman_
Enderman_Lv2

Extremely Good. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2yr
Sinbau
SinbauLv12

Ngl the title did catch my eye- Quite awhile ago I was watching The Moon Knight’s series so seeing this book did catch my eye and to no avail it did not disappoint! The author did a good with world building and setting the tone at the beginning if anything there are only a few grammar errors like hard to read sentences but with that aside I am liking the story! I enjoyed the authors narration style as well as their choice of describing a scene or even the dialogue as well. Either way keep up the good work author!

2yr
Brenden_Whitehead
Brenden_WhiteheadLv3

First of all, my favorite character is moon Knight and I really liked how didn’t try to change the story too much knowing that his actions have consequences and I thought that was really cool. Unlike other fan fic

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Sir_Frog
Sir_FrogLv1

The story is conveluted to the max. There are too many plots going on at the same time. The story also jumps around to much. One chapter your in the beginning, the next your're 6 months into the world. it skips too much, and there are too many things happening at once

2yr
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