Overall, amazing idea, good writing style. Amazing potential in the story. I hope you continue writing. I will just say to anyone planning to read this fic, the idea is amazing. The execution is set to improve by the coming chapters for sure. The writer has a good sense of direction as to where the story is going and a lot of elements are coming together as the chapters go on. Will definitely recommend reading. The only gripe is with the formatting which hopefully will improve as the story goes on.
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LIKEIt was good(caught up) but it feels too fast pace, not that that's bad but it doesn't showcase the development of him as a character and vigilante and of the things around him. It's like a recap(don't know the correct word to use here) with minir development happening on each chapter. It's still good and I liked some of the things that happened on the book but didn't like others.
Writers_Ablood:Lmk what you felt.
I suppose we should let the author develop the story more. If you really analyze the story, it's similar to the tv show as we had no backstory for the first few episodes.
SkyNeves:It was good(caught up) but it feels too fast pace, not that that's bad but it doesn't showcase the development of him as a character and vigilante and of the things around him. It's like a recap(don't know the correct word to use here) with minir development happening on each chapter. It's still good and I liked some of the things that happened on the book but didn't like others.
To me it was okay since I haven't seen the series so I went full blank besides the knowledge I have of other comic book characters and some MCU stuff. But I'll see how it goes but I would still recommend.
Writers_Ablood:I suppose we should let the author develop the story more. If you really analyze the story, it's similar to the tv show as we had no backstory for the first few episodes.