webnovel
Di_Scipline
Di_SciplineLv42yr
2023-05-02 16:54

[CH:15] A pretty solid read. It's not your usual system or gacha Marvel fic. The book has its own unique elements, Obviously the mc with moon knight powers and presence of Ghost Rider(imagine the Avengers with ghost rider, that would be dope). Anyway the writing quality and world development is done well. The conversations and character designs are decent 👍. I don't know about updating stability since this is a relatively new fic and i just binged through it. Hope the author will not drop this gem halfway ,Looking forward to reading more interesting and fun chapters. All the best 😁🙌

Marvel: Reborn as Moon Knight

White_Wolf_7506
4.7
18 Chs

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
White_Wolf_7506
White_Wolf_7506Author

I hope you guys like it. It is my first try at writing so do give me some slack while reading it.

2yr

Writers_Ablood
Writers_AbloodLv2

Overall, amazing idea, good writing style. Amazing potential in the story. I hope you continue writing. I will just say to anyone planning to read this fic, the idea is amazing. The execution is set to improve by the coming chapters for sure. The writer has a good sense of direction as to where the story is going and a lot of elements are coming together as the chapters go on. Will definitely recommend reading. The only gripe is with the formatting which hopefully will improve as the story goes on.

2yr
R_Canton
R_CantonLv14

As someone who owns over 300 DC graphic novels, and has never once picked up a Moon Knight book (or seen the show), I did not once have to question the abilities of the character. The author has a great idea of where they want the story to go. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Theroxis
TheroxisLv14

Out of all the mentally stable and infinitely better choices out there, WHO tf wants to be Moon Knight?

2yr
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

Too many story plots moving at the same time makes the fic convoluted .It feels more like a diary entry then a story narration .

2yr
Enderman_
Enderman_Lv2

Extremely Good. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2yr
Sinbau
SinbauLv12

Ngl the title did catch my eye- Quite awhile ago I was watching The Moon Knight’s series so seeing this book did catch my eye and to no avail it did not disappoint! The author did a good with world building and setting the tone at the beginning if anything there are only a few grammar errors like hard to read sentences but with that aside I am liking the story! I enjoyed the authors narration style as well as their choice of describing a scene or even the dialogue as well. Either way keep up the good work author!

2yr
Brenden_Whitehead
Brenden_WhiteheadLv3

First of all, my favorite character is moon Knight and I really liked how didn’t try to change the story too much knowing that his actions have consequences and I thought that was really cool. Unlike other fan fic

2mth
Sir_Frog
Sir_FrogLv1

The story is conveluted to the max. There are too many plots going on at the same time. The story also jumps around to much. One chapter your in the beginning, the next your're 6 months into the world. it skips too much, and there are too many things happening at once

2yr
Related Stories

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

John Dutton is the head of the Dutton family. He owns the largest ranch in the United States. Adjacent to the ranch are the first national park in the United States, Indian reservations, and real estate developers. Dante Dotton, the youngest son of the Dotton family who runs a pub business, will do everything he can to protect his family. He who has always seemed the quietest of the five brothers will be the one with the most blood on his hands, all for the good of the family. “Whoever wants our land, to harm our family or take away our freedom, should be prepared to play in the swamp where everyone wants to get their hands on the land that my family has had for over a hundred years and will continue to be this way for generations to come.”

SrCuervo · Movies
4.8
160 Chs

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider, another soul takes his place. A teenager who committed suicide due to his tragic life gets a second chance in the body of everyone’s favorite neighborhood Spider-Man. Male Lead: Peter Parker or Spider-Man (Tom Holland) Female Lead: Michelle Jones or MJ (Zendaya) Ps- I’ve changed the timeline a little. Peter (15y/o) will get his powers in 2010. A few months before Ironman 1 takes place on his first day of high school, which is when the story starts. Also, Peter is 6 feet tall instead of Tom Holland’s 5’8. (A/N: I came back to writing recently and was fairly rusty (I didn’t write for almost a year) and lazy. I was doing short chapters and dragging things out far to long in my last story. This is my redemption story, so to speak. I’ve learned from it and hopefully this one will be better. Also, the romance will start earlier since I’m not writing about 11 year old kids going to magical schools anymore. Lol) No Harem BTW If you like my writing, check out the Patreon! Advanced chapters are available there. VVV Https://www.patreon.com/AlienWarlord

AlienWarlord · Movies
4.6
720 Chs

The Twilight Gamer

Jack Sparrow, A young teen living in the small city of Forks in the year 2005 finds himself waking up one day with a blue holographic panel in front of his face. The system asks him to choose his own stats which it calls S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats. It cautions the young man that his choice is irreversible but he doesn't give it much mind and rashly puts his stats points in. Follow the journey of Jack Sparrow as he experiences a whole new world and the outcome of his own rash decisions. *DISCLAIMER* This is a Twilight Fanfiction. MC pairing isn't going to be told at the beginning so please don't ask for it. This will not be a harem. The system is a mix of Fallout New Vegas but it's also original so don't expect everything on there to be here as well. If you don't mind those two then I wish you a great reading journey. If you want to support me and read ten chapters ahead then check out my Patreon at: Patreon.com/WhiteAuthor Posted on Royal Road and Scribble Hub.

WhiteAuthor · Movies
3.8
92 Chs
Login