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Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv42yr
2023-05-03 16:23

Too many story plots moving at the same time makes the fic convoluted .It feels more like a diary entry then a story narration .

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

also, alot of important development got skip, especially mc settling into new life after transmigration, we got gist of how he invented many things, become rich and now he's basically batman with superpower but that makes the character hard to relate.

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