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Kono_Dio_na
Kono_Dio_naLv139mth
2024-03-26 04:22

I've noticed a lot of spelling mistakes, and some sentences or dialogue are weird to read. and regarding the POV change, you don't need to add xxx POV or yyy POV since you're using the first POV for your MC and 3rd POV for others

The Ape From Space

Warrior988
4.2
176 Chs

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Warrior988
Warrior988Author

Thanks for your review, I plan on editing the earlier chapters and I was going to fix that POV change thing too. But I appreciate your input.

9mth
Kono_Dio_na
Kono_Dio_naLv13

no prob, young man. your story is great tbh.

Warrior988:Thanks for your review, I plan on editing the earlier chapters and I was going to fix that POV change thing too. But I appreciate your input.
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Warrior988
Warrior988Author

thanks for the kind words, sir.

Kono_Dio_na:no prob, young man. your story is great tbh.
9mth
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I'm on chapter 10; it's not the best in the world, but it's entertaining. The protagonist is strong but not invincible for now. I suppose they will grow over time. Keep up the good work! I would add the 'rwby' tag to the fanfic.

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it's a interesting story so far (I'm in ch 20) and I hope that it keeps getting interesting. I have a couple of advices tho, you should put more tags and explain that it is a sayan in the rwby. I don't like the name Kron but that's just my opinion so don't stress over it and finally i don't know why but when you write an a (alone)it's always a capital letter. For example: I was looking at the scenery when A nevermore appeared. if you can try to correct that mistake for future chapters. Overall I enjoyed the story so keep you work, I just wanted to give you a piece of my mind don't take it in a bad way please. Also, I don't know what to think about the artwork....

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Hacven't read the book probly won't buy nice artwork lol 4 stars for trying I guess most people just snag sonmething off Google or don't even bother with art work at all

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What’s the originals name?

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