I'm on chapter 10; it's not the best in the world, but it's entertaining. The protagonist is strong but not invincible for now. I suppose they will grow over time. Keep up the good work! I would add the 'rwby' tag to the fanfic.

it's a interesting story so far (I'm in ch 20) and I hope that it keeps getting interesting. I have a couple of advices tho, you should put more tags and explain that it is a sayan in the rwby. I don't like the name Kron but that's just my opinion so don't stress over it and finally i don't know why but when you write an a (alone)it's always a capital letter. For example: I was looking at the scenery when A nevermore appeared. if you can try to correct that mistake for future chapters. Overall I enjoyed the story so keep you work, I just wanted to give you a piece of my mind don't take it in a bad way please. Also, I don't know what to think about the artwork....

hmmm 🤔 there's not much to say about this yet. the story intro feels like it has personality to me. and the one chapter I was able to read was similar and had little in the way of grammar errors and the dialogue felt almost like sweet chocolate to my ears 👂. I've seen a couple of rwby Saiyan self inserts and to be honest most of them are horrible even though it seems like a really cool idea. as I can only think of one that I actually enjoyed as it was fun to read. But then the author stopped writing it about two years ago after only three chapters. so the story has my attention as hoping it'll be good with strong character interactions.

Hacven't read the book probly won't buy nice artwork lol 4 stars for trying I guess most people just snag sonmething off Google or don't even bother with art work at all

What’s the originals name?

A bit of a letdown. The MC is what superman is to humans in that he's way stronger than everyone and is a simp for one chick. The guy keeps harping about being a thirty year old but blushes when kissed. The dude must have been a 30 year old virgin in his previous life if a peck on the lips leaves him embarrassed and frozen.

I've noticed a lot of spelling mistakes, and some sentences or dialogue are weird to read. and regarding the POV change, you don't need to add xxx POV or yyy POV since you're using the first POV for your MC and 3rd POV for others

Recent fight is GOOOOOOD10/10 Hyped for the next chapter

I enjoy the story. I find it much more in depth and accurate compared to other fan fictions that crossover RWBY and Dragon Ball. Though, not all of it is fully accurate regarding the power levels between RWBY and Dragon Ball but with how the story made its foundation made up the difference. All in all I find this fan fiction High Quality and a good read.