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OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv141yr
2023-08-20 01:51

only read upto 4 chapters because of daily recommendation .too much unnecessary details . boring or my mood is just off. first 3 chapter were about surrounding object like corpse , luxurious doors , big expensive mirror etc. i couldn't focus because situation of MC doesn't seem tiny bit desperate or serious so why useless details .

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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

I debated a lot in making my first chapters to be detailed, but if you try to read the first volume, you would understand it importance,It has a mystery tag, and those early details are to establish the subtle nuances in the story. I know its not for everyone, but if you check it out later in your free time, I hope you will be surprised.

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv14

there only 29 free chapters , 4 of them i read are useless .there is 11 chapters titled as Moon light 1 to 11 . it seems to be waste my free pass and coins . that's the impression i get.

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv14

wow instant reply . I will read this book latter and leave a review , right now I'm sleepy 😪.tommoro night

BRICKTRADER:I debated a lot in making my first chapters to be detailed, but if you try to read the first volume, you would understand it importance,It has a mystery tag, and those early details are to establish the subtle nuances in the story. I know its not for everyone, but if you check it out later in your free time, I hope you will be surprised.
BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

I will work on those chapter names lol... It's not filler

OVERKILL:there only 29 free chapters , 4 of them i read are useless .there is 11 chapters titled as Moon light 1 to 11 . it seems to be waste my free pass and coins . that's the impression i get.
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

I did not even read this but if your chapter names are like this then this Novel is a turn big red flag that I just cant bother to read

BRICKTRADER:I will work on those chapter names lol... It's not filler
BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Lol... I changed the chapter names, so please read them. I wrote the first eleven chapters in one sitting, using over nine hours. I was too tired to make proper-sounding chapter names, but that has been long resolved. At least read a single chapter before passing judgment, that's all I ask. Have a great day!

Kurdi123:I did not even read this but if your chapter names are like this then this Novel is a turn big red flag that I just cant bother to read
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write

BRICKTRADER:Lol... I changed the chapter names, so please read them. I wrote the first eleven chapters in one sitting, using over nine hours. I was too tired to make proper-sounding chapter names, but that has been long resolved. At least read a single chapter before passing judgment, that's all I ask. Have a great day!
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Ah yes Have a beautiful day to ^.^

Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Wow...i only asked you to read a single FREE chapter and make an opinion for yourself. Your reply is excessively rude and bitter. I can assure you, that no matter how much you waste your life in an attempt to troll me, I will never stop writing.

Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Spectator_X
Spectator_XLv1

Psycho rubbish

Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Spectator_X
Spectator_XLv1

If you're having a screw loose upstairs just fix it don't bother us here Read most of your replies to novels and they just utter rubbish You're problem the type that doesn't have contentment Go fix yourself brr

Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Looks like a fake Account from the Author😂😂

Spectator_X:If you're having a screw loose upstairs just fix it don't bother us here Read most of your replies to novels and they just utter rubbish You're problem the type that doesn't have contentment Go fix yourself brr
Tsetth
TsetthLv14

🙆🏽‍♂️😬☠

Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Spectator_X
Spectator_XLv1

Hahaha it's not 🌚

Kurdi123:Looks like a fake Account from the Author😂😂
DeepChiken
DeepChikenLv14

One lf my favorites, goes into a power level that usually marks the end of the novel. Not your typical level 1 cultivator to level 900 but all the fights seem the same just at a higher dinension. He claims planets and stuff. Very cool. Haven’t noticed any grammer issues either

DaoisttwG3qW
DaoisttwG3qWLv1

So why bother answering if it's not?! My hand to cut that's you're a fake account

Spectator_X:Hahaha it's not 🌚
DaoisttwG3qW
DaoisttwG3qWLv1

Anyways i'll read coz i'm curious now... And i'll give you a rating but i'm usually hard to satisfy so you can consider having 2star max, no kinding

Gear5th
Gear5thLv12

Bro try reading this novel its freaking good, if you won't like it its ok👍 title: (Naval gacha System: it's time to monopolize the seven seas) 🔥

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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Hi everyone, Author here. I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.) Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book. The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that. Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist. From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win. I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs. The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story. I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure. Bricktrader.

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