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FF_AIM_BOTLv31yr
2023-11-04 15:15

worst novel just info dump.i have read 100 plus chps but still just info dump you can't even get the basic outline of the world just don't waste your time like me .

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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

I'm sorry... It does get faster paced. This is a character driven book unlike most web novels, and you tend to follow the adventure of the protagonist more closely.

BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

This is a book that deals with characters that control time. If I don't get in-depth with some details at the early chapters, there would be no way for you to understand what would happen next, and in order for me not to repeat information again and again, I gave you all the tools you needed in volume one

Pumaz
PumazLv14

You can’t read dude

Leviathan_Lord
Leviathan_LordLv4

Mate you have no patience. I honestly feel that this book is not meant for WN type of 1 chp daily but a whole book where it will be s lot more positively review..unlike WN not very patient readers.

Gear5th
Gear5thLv13

Bro try reading this novel its freaking good, if you won't like it its ok👍 title: (Naval gacha System: it's time to monopolize the seven seas) 🔥

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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Hi everyone, Author here. I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.) Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book. The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that. Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist. From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win. I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs. The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story. I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure. Bricktrader.

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