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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor1yr
2023-04-19 15:47

Hi everyone, Author here. I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.) Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book. The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that. Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist. From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win. I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs. The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story. I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure. Bricktrader.

The Primordial Record

BRICKTRADER
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1288 Chs

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Asxre
AsxreLv13

Is there Romance or harem?

1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Yes, but later in the book...

Asxre:Is there Romance or harem?
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Test_Misc
Test_MiscLv4

so there is harem?

BRICKTRADER:Yes, but later in the book...
1yr
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Test_Misc
Test_MiscLv4

so there is h a r em

BRICKTRADER:Yes, but later in the book...
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

If you mean having multiple women over the course of his lifespan, then yes. Most people won't be able to keep up with his growth, so I except his love interest to perish over time.

Test_Misc:so there is h a r em
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Test_Misc
Test_MiscLv4

so like he has one lover and they die then he gets another one and it continues like this? or like he has multiple women at the same time that was that I meant.

BRICKTRADER:If you mean having multiple women over the course of his lifespan, then yes. Most people won't be able to keep up with his growth, so I except his love interest to perish over time.
1yr
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

But that doesn’t make sense since after the first time he should realise that having girlfriends that would die is pointless

BRICKTRADER:If you mean having multiple women over the course of his lifespan, then yes. Most people won't be able to keep up with his growth, so I except his love interest to perish over time.
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

He is not searching for girlfriends, if you would live for millions of year's, it is not a bad thing to get a partner every now and then... I feel all these is entering spoilers territory.

Romance_guy:But that doesn’t make sense since after the first time he should realise that having girlfriends that would die is pointless
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hot_papichulo
hot_papichuloLv15

This is definitely an interesting aspect and I love it. Like when an mc is really talented they try to make the love interest or women and friends around him just as talented.

BRICKTRADER:He is not searching for girlfriends, if you would live for millions of year's, it is not a bad thing to get a partner every now and then... I feel all these is entering spoilers territory.
1yr
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Heavenly_Supreme
Heavenly_SupremeLv4

author I just read the description of this novelthe section that says he will try to keep his humanity puzzles melike keep his humanity in which aspectlike his looks or feelings or whatI hope you can answer me to see if I will read the novel or not

BRICKTRADER:Yes, but later in the book...
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Thank you for your question. This part would not really affect the story until the latter part. So you can read at your leisure. I wanted to take this character through a journey that would potentially span multiple millennia. While trying to answer the questions about immortality and what it does to you. This would be the primary theme of this book, for I don't want to just write about cool fights between immortals, I want to know how they feel when they watch millions of years go by and everything they love and hate fades away..

Heavenly_Supreme:author I just read the description of this novelthe section that says he will try to keep his humanity puzzles melike keep his humanity in which aspectlike his looks or feelings or whatI hope you can answer me to see if I will read the novel or not
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Daaaaaaaa
DaaaaaaaaLv15

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Polygamy
PolygamyLv4

is this novel polygamy or monogamy?

BRICKTRADER:He is not searching for girlfriends, if you would live for millions of year's, it is not a bad thing to get a partner every now and then... I feel all these is entering spoilers territory.
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

I don't think any of these labels would apply to our MC. He is going to live for a very long time. IDK, he might just decide to try new things now and then. It's life, I guess. You would eventually get to do everything given enough time.

Polygamy:is this novel polygamy or monogamy?
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blalala_zzz
blalala_zzzLv15

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1yr
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0THeunkown0
0THeunkown0Lv4

is mc evil or anything

BRICKTRADER:He is not searching for girlfriends, if you would live for millions of year's, it is not a bad thing to get a partner every now and then... I feel all these is entering spoilers territory.
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

If you crush an ant while walking are you evil? Now humanity is like the ants to the MC's boot, does that make him evil?

0THeunkown0:is mc evil or anything
1yr
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0THeunkown0
0THeunkown0Lv4

bruh am asking for your mc alignment not some cringey edgy question

BRICKTRADER:If you crush an ant while walking are you evil? Now humanity is like the ants to the MC's boot, does that make him evil?
1yr
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BRICKTRADER
BRICKTRADERAuthor

Lol... But I hoped I gave you the hint about my answer. I want to leave my mc character development to those that choose to invest in the story. He will live for millions of years, I will let the story decide the path he follows. Please be more civil with your replies, spreading negativity is never something to be proud of. Thank you

0THeunkown0:bruh am asking for your mc alignment not some cringey edgy question
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1yr
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0THeunkown0
0THeunkown0Lv4

aah i see you emotional type

BRICKTRADER:Lol... But I hoped I gave you the hint about my answer. I want to leave my mc character development to those that choose to invest in the story. He will live for millions of years, I will let the story decide the path he follows. Please be more civil with your replies, spreading negativity is never something to be proud of. Thank you
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