Test_Misc

ig this cuck of an author at least wanted the initial attention readers give, if only for a little while untill they dropped this ntr bs

bro you spent SOOO MANY PARAS explaining about her yet not a single one of them had details about her, all those were just flowery words with no meaning, like wtf dude, tell what her face looks like, what is her hair colour, what is her eye colour, and all that, but all you say are some superficial words that paint no picture of her in my mind, i have no idea what she looks like ,even after you wasted those many paragraphs telling us about her, which imo is very excessive, there is no need to waste that much space for just description, not to mention useless description that tells nothing about the character

really bro?.you have all the power in existence, and all you do is skirt chase? wtf is wrong with you....if this continues to get even more boring I'll just drop

is this all that's gonna happen in this novel? just moving from one girl to another?? what even is the use of him being immortal?? all this can be done by a normal very smart human with no powers, I don't understand the point of him having powers....is there anything else that he would do? go to other worlds? explore? something like that? cos this is unbelievably boring, this all an extremely smart person can do.......

don't use "our op mc" it's CRINGE ASF

hehehe, another mommy in the way

weird but ok...

then how was a male born? without the y chromosome (which only male have) there is no possibility of a baby being male

laozi?!?!

then what bout that succubi? just the 2nd chapter and she is being sucked on by a random man....this is ntr