Item: Young Justice: The black super soldier
Rating: 1

DcelanoLv51yr

2023-04-05 22:02

It a harem story so i have to give you one star. Sorry but let not lie with our self here harem is trash.

Young Justice: The black super soldier

Tjsmith1202

2.4

46 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies7

RainInNightLv14

Look at the color Webnovel made the stars!!! They are trying to trick ppl

1yr

shirou_sureiyaLv4

wow some harem hater here hahhaahha this is war

1yr

SubsyLv12

Nearly all harem are just shallow fuffuliment translates, like if I wanted to read abt collecting beings read pokemon

shirou_sureiya:wow some harem hater here hahhaahha this is war

1yr

pro999Lv14

you ratiod him haha you won

shirou_sureiya:wow some harem hater here hahhaahha this is war

1yr

shirou_sureiyaLv4

not all man not all

Subsy:Nearly all harem are just shallow fuffuliment translates, like if I wanted to read abt collecting beings read pokemon

1yr

SubsyLv12

That’ why I wrote ‘nearly’, I do like some harems

shirou_sureiya:not all man not all

1yr

SubsyLv12

When you say ‘you’, are you talking abt me or the other guy. Cause you replied to his comment. If your talking abt me being ratiod than I pity you and your single brain cell. Thats all I can and will say.

pro999:you ratiod him haha you won

1yr

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StromLanternLv5

Couldn't read past chapter one, the spelling and grammar, sentence structure, everything is just wrong with this one, give it a pass until the Author gets it edited.

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SS_OzymanderLv2

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no

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1_Am_A_New_GodLv3

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MikemaikuLv13

I haven’t read the story but all the reviews are low star for no real reason other it’s a harem. I personally don’t like them either but that doesn’t mean it’s bad and you shouldn’t leave a bad review because of it. Unless it’s done bad and you express that instead of just saying “Harem bad I don’t like one star. So this is to help balance it out and give the author some encouragement. Hopefully the story is at least ok or I’ll sound stupid

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The_man_The_mythLv4

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhjh nasty harem story gross

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Fuck_You_2730Lv1

Merda . Simplesmente isso . Nem parece que lá autor está realmente tentando , mesmo fábrica que só são escritas para passar o tempo não são tão ruins quanto essa !

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